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  Captenswan Fox chapter 5 . 10/1/2018 I'm sorry I didn't read it all the way she wasn't touching anything I apologize but I do LOVE YOUR STORY! |
| Captenswan Fox chapter 5 . 10/1/2018 WHAT THE BLOODYHELL?! YOU PUT HER TOUCHING HIS DICK IN THERE?! IM ONLY 13! |
| Captenswan Fox chapter 5 . 10/1/2018 WHAT THE HELL?! WHY ON EARTH DID YOU PUT A CONDOM IN THIS FANFICTION?! IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EMBARRASING everything else was cool though so MAKE THE FUCK MORE DON'T STOP YOU BLOODY WRITTER! THE BLOODYHELL YOUR GOING TO STOP! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/19/2018 I love this need moer |
 PastOneonta chapter 27 . 12/8/2017 This is a lovely story. It was enjoyable to watch Killian and Emma fall in love and build their love naturally. It never felt rushed or pushed. She gave Neal consideration but she didn't love him anymore. She knew Killian had a shameful past but it was the past and he was changing. I liked his friendship with Belle. I liked David and his interactions with Killian. Neal unfortunately made some really bad decisions and it almost cost him everything. I think Henry will visit him and want him in his life, but that's because Henry is such a good person and he would forgive Neal. Killian figuring out Pan's plot and saving everyone was very well done and it was nice to see him as the hero. I didn't miss Regina. And I liked Snow better when she was fighting villains and strategizing Neverland, she was stronger in that setting. A wedding and a baby and this wrapped up in a sweet and entertaining story of our favorite fictional characters. Thanks for sharing, I am planning to see what else you have written. |
| musicnlyrics chapter 27 . 10/26/2017 I love it. I’m a huge fan of snuggles with Emma, and you gave her just enough. Thanks for sharing. |
| Avivagreene chapter 9 . 5/31/2017 Loving this story |
| Avivagreene chapter 21 . 3/9/2017 Big sigh, so romantic! |
| Avivagreene chapter 3 . 3/8/2017 Thoroughly enjoying this story and the nice little touches like the library card |
| Amber611 chapter 27 . 4/10/2016 Awesome fic and job! I absolutely LOVED it! :) |
| Five-0 Fan chapter 26 . 3/20/2016 Since I didn't look first, decided to come back a post...eeeeeeeee! There's a sequel. Which I'll be reading shortly...perhaps not all in one day though. :) |
| Five-0 Fan chapter 27 . 3/20/2016 Absolutely love this whole story! Pure excellence. Read all 27 chapters today...sad to read the end, but what a perfect 'happily ever after'. |
| Mrs. Hook- Jones-O'Donoghue chapter 6 . 1/10/2016 This is one of the BEST and FUNNIEST takes on Hook adjusting to modern society that I have ever read. I love it! |
| Guest chapter 27 . 10/24/2015 I like that name you choose. I speak Gealic and I don't even know that, guess you learn something new everyday |
| chnctgislnd07 chapter 27 . 10/9/2015 Awww so sweet :) |
