Reviews for Boundless Love: The Tale Of Athena
look2019 chapter 23 . 9/19/2019
Good Chapter!
Stone125 chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
i hope you work fast you motherfucker i need you to get it done now.
J chapter 1 . 1/29/2019
Your back hooray! Cant wait to read your great work.
Mathew5641 chapter 26 . 1/28/2019
No need to apologize writing a story is tough enough just knowing that you are still planning to continue is good enough for me I can't wait to see what you wanna do in the future I wish you good luck and may we meet in the halls of Valhalla
GordonFreeman72 chapter 26 . 1/28/2019
GREAT!
GordonFreeman72 chapter 18 . 1/27/2019
I mean yeah, LGBT fics are hard for me to write too, so I completely understand. Also, could you maybe look in to the Titanfall 2 community? If your T2 writing is anywhere near as good as this, then I’d love to see some of it!
GordonFreeman72 chapter 16 . 1/27/2019
HOLY SHIET! ATHENA CAN TALK NOW!
Guest chapter 10 . 1/27/2019
Ok buddy, time to get things straight. Course, not coarse.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/27/2019
Aaaaaaa! Such a good story!
Max Taylor Chan chapter 25 . 9/13/2018
I actually like the distinction between the two different types of Pokémon-trainer interactions that leads to delta evolution: Elliot x Athena is romance based, while Celeste x Lilim is friendship based.

As of headcanon I kind of wish that delta evolved Pokémon being granted full personhood, with romance-based delta evolution treated like marriages and friendship based ones treated like siblings.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/22/2018
Unsanctioned psykers?! THAT CALLS FOR EXTERMINATUS!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/22/2018
SHE'S A GENESTEALER! KILL THEM BOTH BEFORE THE TYRRANID HIVE FLEETS ARRIVE! THE FATE OF ALL LIVE IN THE SIGMENTUM DEPENDS ON IT!

AVE IMPERATOR!
Gu3T chapter 25 . 6/28/2018
Less cuts. It makes it hard to look at with all the chopping. Even if it is for point of view changes
Mathew5641 chapter 25 . 6/27/2018
I'm so happy you're back with a new chapter I can't wait to see what adventures they will have keep up the amazing work
Mugen Kagemaru chapter 25 . 6/25/2018
Still suffering from a bit of text wall.

Perhaps make individual dialogues their own paragraphs? I've heard that's actually the proper way, but personally, it makes these easier to read.

Looking forward to more, all the same.
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