Not one bit of dialogue. Impressive

Wow. Just, wow.

I swear this is really good! Thank you

Please make another!

Really well done. I would love for this to expand, but it's brilliant as it is as well.

I love your writing! Can't wait to read more :) Very sensual and romantic while still being lust filled. Beautiful style.

so amazing

very very good! :)

dang! even though i dont get into sex scenes much, i looooove that just cause you wrote it! the way you write and choose your words is so beautiful and amazing. pleeeease keep it up im intrigued by this beginning