This was really fun to read! The kills were so detailed and I could perfectly picture the fights in my head as I read. I love how you included so many of the bears too! Awesome job!

Wow! Well that was different. Good different I think. I was sure that the slasher bear was naughty bear but then when they called him i got a bit confused :)

That is a cool story. Peace out.

Very... very good! I LOVED it all! You truly captured Naughty's cute but murderous personality! My favorite part had to be when the Slasher Bear was slicing through Naughty, and Naughty wasn't screaming. It really shows how much more of a badarse he is! Well done! Very well done!