Toph's massage so her & very much shows her softer-I'm-sugar-coating-it demeanor. True Aang never left Katara. What they had was a real true deep love, that Spirits themselves knew was timeless. :'-)

meh. I liked the part about Toph, though. It really acknowledged her soft side. The romance got a little bit too fluffy for my taste, but I'm sure that's just my weird girl version of being macho, I guess. My nickname is shadow, after all. Kataara got a little OOC, as did Aang, but it was awesome just the same. Am I being condradicting? Sometimes I sound conflicted, but that's just my multi- track mind.

That was, just so beautiful... GREAT JOB!

.God.
I'm crying my eyes out...no kidding...
Beautiful...just...beautiful...
Please make more...

I CRIED DAM YOU ! I HAVE A KATAANG WEAK SPOT AND IT IS WHEN EITHER AANG OR KATARA DIES AND THE PAIN THE OTHER FEELS , OR WHEN THEY LOOSE THEIR MEMORIES , AND THE PAIN THE OTHER FEELS . YOU PEOPLE LOVE POKING AT MY SOFT SPOTS YET AGAIN I DO ALWAYS DO THIS TO MYSELF I KNEW AANG WAS GOING TO DIE .( joking around )

loved your story , you have great potential to become an author

that's just so sad, I'm crying my heart out right now

I have always loved your writing so this to me was amazing! I do not really have any criticism.
This story made me sad, so good job lol. It had the right amount of emotions, and it was all in the right place.

That was wonderful. You really, really nailed it.

That was absolutely wonderful! I loved it.

I really like this. Especially with the flashbacks.

Love this story! Though it was sad at the end I loved how you portrayed Aang and his awesome personality and I loved how you portrayed Aang and Katara's sweet relationship. All in all though I love this story and hope you write more! ;)

Oreocheesecakes,

Great story. Please, don't beat yourself up over not being able to write "fluff." Death and heartbreak are also a part of life. You have a gift of being able to portray Katara in one of those moments where words fail most of us.

In other words, a very good story. Although I see Sokka as being not so much the eternal goof as some, your display of his cluelessness in regards to love was great, yet at the same time, you didn't demean him.

Looking forward to your next post.

-arizony-