Reviews for The Bet |
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Rebal-nation chapter 4 . 7/14 Such a nice pair. Loved it |
Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 4 . 6/17 Choking. On. Marshmallows. |
Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 2 . 6/17 Oh god. Oh fùcking god. Cute. Adorable. KAWAII. |
OofusDoofus chapter 4 . 5/10 Love it |
olaeczka chapter 4 . 4/12 xDDDDDDDD |
TheLoud chapter 4 . 12/15/2019 That was cute, and made at least as much sense as canon. |
Leafers B. Crazy chapter 4 . 11/3/2019 So glad that the story was just as good at the first chapter as it was at the last! You know, I actually think it got better. Although, I do think it was a rather large leap to make them get married a year after school ended. Overall, it was a really funny/sweet story. |
Leafers B. Crazy chapter 1 . 11/3/2019 So far, so good. :) I actually found myself laughing and nearly crying in the same chapter. I have read some fanfiction where the story declines as it goes on. . .I guess the most I can say about it thus far is this; excellent start. |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 4 . 9/13/2019 Oh this is Wonderful fic! James already like Severus for so long... All his friends knows about it from the start... Severus know it's true from the truth potion and its proof. Public announcement of their dating after months... Lily and Severus made up! James and Severus married! Absolutely Great! |
Wolf Amme chapter 4 . 8/12/2019 That was really cute :) |
Dontreallyknowtbh chapter 4 . 5/31/2019 That ending... beautiful *wipes tears of joy from eyes* |
HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 4 . 5/19/2019 Lol so often especially at the references to a well rumored scandal without letting us know of the actual scandal. My guess is someone headed Black's backs off or in some way cursed them. That or a failed animagus transformation like Hermione with the polyjuice. Oh and I loved the "really there are many ways to impersonate another" and "laws against feeding potions to students, poisoning students ...IT goes without saying!" Yeah there- really should be enforceable laws around that type of misuse. Well done! |
Charlie Waffles chapter 4 . 5/4/2019 I’m pretty sure Severus would’ve taken James’s name instead of Severus wanting to keep his, considering his home life in canon. Overall, I liked the take on this pairing. |
nakala chapter 4 . 4/26/2019 This was soooooo good! |
Starsamongthemoon chapter 4 . 3/31/2019 Love this! |