I really like this

Aww! This was a sweet story! I think that you captured the characters very well!

I liked this story, Elsa does seem like the workaholic type to me, since working would probably keep her mind off her powers. In my opinion there should have been a Black Pearl cameo. Just a ship with black sails in the background. Oh and when I saw the King and Queen of Arendelle's ship capsize in a stormy sea, I immediately thought of Davy Jones and Pirates of the Caribbean. I can picture them asking "The King and Queen of Arendelle, do you fear death, do you fear that dark abyss?" It would be heartbreaking to see Anna and Elsa's parents serving Davy Jones, slowly becoming "part of the ship". Davy Jones is also one of the few people that wouldn't be affected if Elsa blasted him in the heart. I think Anna would be quite kind to him, or at least understand his pain. She went through the same thing after all.

Sorry if I ranted too much. Happens all the time.

i love the end so much!

This was awesome! Perfect balance between touching and funny. I love the sisterly bond between Elsa and Anna––not perfectly reconciled yet, but their love for each other is strong.

Hey, awesome reference to Tangled! Yes, I saw the two of them in the film as well when the guests are entering the castle gates. ;) So again, I really liked what you did here with Elsa falling ill from overworking herself and Anna taking care of some of her diplomatic work as Elsa sleeps for TWO DAYS! XD Given what went on between them for thirteen years, I could see Anna getting upset over believing that Elsa was shutting her out again by denying that she was exhausted from work, then Anna believing it was her fault because they spend Elsa's days off together rather than Elsa resting. This are among the differences they have, but also makes them great is how those differences can compliment each other. Anna can encourage Elsa to not overwork herself, while Elsa can assure Anna that she loves her sister and that them spending time together is fun and not a chore for Elsa. After losing so many years of communication, Elsa wants nothing more than to spend her time with Anna when she has days off.

So again, this was very sweet, and I love how you wrote it so that Anna actually spoke with Rapunzel and Eugene, and then she tells Elsa when they keep company about Rapunzel's past with the magic powers she used to have in her hair. ;)

Great work! Nice touch with Rapunzel and Eugene...