hi, would love to see this become a proper story.

I can't give much story advice beyond probably aim for a touch more real and permanent consequences than what the MLP universe has but not quite the same god awful luck Harry has in the HP universe.

If possible I'd love to see a pony missing a limb or something as it's something neither MLP or any of the scattered fanfics cover.

Please continue your story is amazing

I would greatly wish that you would make this a full story despite the time since the last update.

I just want you to know that :
1. I love this story so much! (But, what will happen to his store?)
2. The link of 'wizardsgirl25 . tumblr post / 113173547388 / so' makes me cry. It's just so different (in a good way, of course) from the other fanficts i've read (even if it is only the plot). I can't wait for you to publish the fanfic of the link.

do you have any plans on continuing this story of FoT?

This story is awesome and while I was at first 'eh' at the Tumblr post idea, I like it. I hope you've written it because I would love to read it.

This is a fairly interesting idea, so good luck.

Awesome sauce galore

Orion/Luna pairing! :D

I love this. Its just so cute and adorable. I hope you write more!

Surely good

I would love more of this.

This is really interesting. Please continue this

This is a very interesting story that has a different twist on the usual story I would really love to read more of this so please decided to keep this up and update it again soon because I can't wait to see just what you are going to have happen next in this really interesting and different story.

this is so cool so far