Reviews for Kicked Out
Tenshimeowmanga chapter 6 . 11/26/2019
Oh my, the one she thought was hot shit is her daddy.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/5/2018
Sherria, Carla, and Romeo will be in tears once they hear this
Guest chapter 6 . 8/9/2017
I need gum!(gum helps my stress)ahhhhhhhhhhh!Luce don't destroy anything!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/4/2017
Damn it Mira why would you hate Lucy!And Levy how are you and do you hate Lucy!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/27/2017
Right before Lucy let I would have made her turn around with the biggest smile ever and say "I hate all of you so much!" And then she would walk out with no regrets
Guest chapter 26 . 4/20/2017
I think you should just rewrite it, I really have enjoyed the story.
Ashikaga-chan417 chapter 15 . 12/2/2016
Whyyyyyyyyy! Why Wendy!
Gaia Kame chapter 26 . 7/28/2016
Sweetie, if it's that bad, you need to seek help. It's scary, I know as I've been there. It's scary asking for help and even being so depressed and emotionally unstable that you're sent to a 'mental hospital' for being clinically depressed; but you'll find going away as an inpatient to be helped and cared for, for such horrible feelings and numbness is so much better. I know this because I've tried killing myself before and was forced to be an inpatient to not only get help but pinpoint what the causes are and fix those things too. I have scars from cuts and burns from years ago that are self inflicted harm as well as harm from family. I have mental and emotional scars. I have PTSD (Post Tramatic Stress Disorder). You're not alone feeling such pain, but from experience I'm telling you get help now. Ignoring it only makes it worse. If this is the worst you've felt you need to get help now with the history of attempts and self harm you've admitted to here. If you EVER need to talk I'm willing to be here as much as you allow as I understand the type of pain you feel. I understand what it's like to feel alone while feeling this way. So don't hesitate. Get help now. And I shall pray for you. Why do I care? Because I know the way depression hurts so much that you pray for death as I've been there. I know horrors of one's own mind with the suffocating loneliness. I can relate more than you'll like to hear. Not only that but your a Fairy Tail fan and writer. All these things make you a kindred spirit to me. To me, as odd as it sounds, you are nakama. And Nakama fight for each other and the stick by each other. So I shall pray. I shall hope. And I will be here if you ever want it while continuously practically demanding you get help. So until next time, Ja ne (see ya).
Jade WillowScyth chapter 26 . 7/28/2016
Why did you have to make Wendy die? I cried on that chapter.
ArtistictEmotions chapter 26 . 7/28/2016
May God bless you.
Satan has his attacks but...if you keep trusting god..everything will be fine.

~ArtistictEmotions
Lord Revan Flame chapter 26 . 7/27/2016
I can't hope to understand you
I will never know your pain, or maybe I won't for now
But I do know that it is agonizing
Stand strong and stared tall
Let no darkness win
The light is always strongest in the dark and in depression we dredge out our greater selves
Pull through and keep persevering
You are better, and you can be greater
Live
Love
Laugh
Weep
Grieve
Mourn
Rage
Hate
Despise
If you're feeling, you're living
Life persists
Guest chapter 26 . 7/27/2016
I am so sorry! I know words can't express anything or make you really feel better, and sorry seems really lame, but I hope your life gets better. God cares for us all, and knows each one of us by name. He is watching out for you, and has a full life ahead of you. He would never let one of his children spend their life like this. It will all even out in the end. It always does.
Callifer00 chapter 16 . 6/21/2016
Good job this chapter adds drama but unfortunately I started bawling my eyes out
Gaia Kame chapter 3 . 6/20/2016
I like this story a lot, don't get me wrong; but I'm extremely pissed off right now. Team Natsu tried to kill Lucy too and with the hate acts with burning her house down and trying to get everyone to hate Lucy their actions go against all of what Fairy Tail stands for. Since Natsu, Gray, and Erza have gone against the very foundation of Fairy Tail (which is nakama) for the dumbest reasons while trying to kill Lucy those three should be kicked out as well. Lucy stepped down, she wasn't going to kill Natsu but he used his girlfriend to literally try and kill Lucy under a claim of not fitting their expected image of a Fairy Tail Mage and what they represent. You know.. Laxus pulled that very same stunt and got kicked out, you know that right? Team Natsu (minus Lisanna) should have been kicked out. Lucy STOOD DOWN and said she wouldn't kill Natsu, Natsu BEGGED FOR IT (Lucy killing him cause he's too 'proud' to admit defeat), and then ATTACKED LUCY when she was hugging Lisanna and literally started burning her throat out stating he was going to kill her to prove they cut ties from Lucy as well as because they didn't fit some weird mental image of how she should be. Lucy defended her life! So she was kicked out because she defended herself and used a supposed form of dark magic? If that's the case then Freed, Mira, and Bixslow should be kicked out too for using forms of dark magic. Mira has demons inside of her for Christ's sake, Freed showed his dark magic and demon form during the thunder palace, and Bixslow's magic is considered a dark magic by the council due to his magic possessing souls thus possessing people. This whole thing is a contradiction and it pisses me off! Why would Makarov go along with this without doing the same to Gray, Erza, and Natsu?! Hell, based off these excuses Mira, Bixslow, Freed, Laxus, Erza, Gray, and Natsu should all be kicked out of Fairy Tail and stay kicked out. So serious, what the hell man?!

*deep breath in* Okay now that I got that off my chest, I want to let you know that besides for what I ranted about I find this story interesting. I am curious to see what happens next. I love how Lisanna isn't made into some plotting witch that used some spell or manipulation of the guild's feelings to turn everyone against Lucy for some petty reasons like "She was replacing me!" or "Natsu is mine!" crap. So I look forward to what happens next to see what happens next and if all of Fairy Tail turns against Natsu, Gray, and Erza for them uncallingly tormenting a fellow nakama, going completely out of their way to bring as much torment to an old team mate for NO REASON, trying to kill her, and crying like a bunch a wussy bit he's for having their asses handed to them to have Lucy kicked out of the guild for basically the same reasoning - honestly having more reason to kick those three out with what I've already listed and with all their destruction as well. Basically those three got pissy with Lucy not being how they thought she should be, tried to hurt her by kicking her off the team, realized it didn't work so got petty and spiteful so went COMPLETELY out of their way to try and hurt her. Really, who would want to interact with assholes like that? It wouldn't surprise me if the whole guild treats those three the same as the had towards Lucy at the end with whispers of "Better not talk to those three.. They'll betray you in a heartbeat and attack you just to use it as an excuse to kick you out of the guild after pretending to be your best friends like a bunch of two-faced people that they are." I hope Lisanna doesn't stay with Natsu either cause how Natsu acted isn't what she thought Natsu was as a person (he ruined the image she had of him in her mind - a loving sweet boy that was loyal to a fault and stood up for Nakama no matter what, who was willing to risk his life for any and all that was a part of the guild. Someone who wouldn't use their girlfriend to try killing ex teammate of his that his girlfriend saw as a sister).
Ugh, I'm ranting again. Sorry. Either way good job writing. Now excuse me as I must read more in hopes Lisanna breaks up with Natsu and some justice is given to Lucy for this crap she didn't deserve with a plea Gray Natsu and Erza are kicked out eventually by the whole guild turning against them and doing exactly to them as those three did to Lucy. Just, ugh- I need to read. So until next time, Ja ne!
jingerr chapter 3 . 6/20/2016
OK i love Lucy's name change! Lucy Trustblood has bit to it! Lol
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