| Reviews for Aloha NCIS |
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  Orin chapter 4 . 6/19 Buena historia, novedosa...lastima que se quede inacabada...pero igualmente muchas gracias por tu trabajo. Saludos. |
 13360116-Delete-account chapter 4 . 6/13 Oooh update soon please. |
| Astrahan chapter 4 . 2/10 Please update soon. Love this story |
| LoveFanFictionForLife chapter 1 . 9/19/2019 Love it! Normally i gravitate to the mcrt as family fics but this one is just amazing! |
| SumNumb3rs chapter 4 . 9/17/2019 Would hope that that last paragraph didn't mean Tim would ever return to D.C.! What would Tim's first 5-0 case be like? Would Chin be a test subject for Tim's latest computer game? Danny a beta reader for Tim's latest book? Kono a girlfriend for Tim instead of Adam? Maybe Ducky retires to the islands and brings Jimmy with him after Tim offers to sponsor Jimmy and Breena's Hawaiian wedding on the beach and they want to stay there! Inquiring minds want to know! |
| Zak saturday 1 chapter 4 . 6/5/2019 Update soon |
| M chapter 4 . 4/6/2019 Well, I'm a little upset that I only just found this story, because I am completely in love with it! |
| WCGal01 chapter 4 . 3/26/2019 I really love this story McGee is my favorite character and Hawaii 5-0 is one of my favorite shows. I hope there will be more of this story soon it draws me into it every time I read it |
| karmagrace chapter 1 . 3/10/2019 I really hope you continue this story. I keep coming back to see if there have been any updates. |
| daffyduck527 chapter 4 . 11/11/2018 I've noticed that you haven't updated in a few years. I really hope that you haven't abandoned the story. I for one would like to see how everything turns out for Tim in his new home. I know that getting negative reviews can be depressing but don't quit. Real life can also be daunting. I hope to see updates in the near future. Keep writing! |
| Adrania chapter 4 . 9/25/2018 I love this story. One of my favorites for a long time. I hope you do end up posting more. Just ignore the mean comments they are not want matters. What matters is that there are people who love your work. |
| monkeywrench542 chapter 4 . 9/6/2018 any chance of an update anytime soon? good story line, and hoping for more soon. |
| SumNumb3rs chapter 2 . 7/13/2018 I love everything about this story so far, except . . . that he agreed to let them call him Professor! Tony always used McNicknames to disrespect or make fun of Tim. Even though you might say 'Professor' is a term of respect, I can't see him agreeing to another round of nicknaming after what he just got away from. That includes Abby calling him 'Timmy' as if he were a child, too. I see Steve's constant use of 'Danno' for Danny as disrespectful too, considering the amount of times he's asked Steve not to. I believe it is showing respect to a person to call them by their first name unless requested otherwise. I really wished he'd told Steve 'no' to 'Professor'! Why not call Kono 'surfer girl' and Steve 'Seal boy' instead of the respectful 'Commander'. |
| Please come back chapter 4 . 6/4/2018 I really love your story and hope that you continue. If you are going to publish anything online, you need to develop a thicker skin. There is always going to be people who criticize what you do no matter what. If those people don't like your storyline, there are thousands of other stories on they can read instead. |
| Child of Jon Snow chapter 4 . 5/22/2018 are you still getting not nice comments? i like this story :( |
