Reviews for Broly: The Stable Super Saiyan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() genial |
![]() ![]() Why couldnt he tackle Goku ?! |
![]() ![]() This is a brilliant story please continue this! |
![]() ![]() well that's true.I mean I was born on other planet but raised on Earth! but Broly, on the other hand,was raised on a ruined planet as I saw when I was at reach of him, if he was not bad, then he could also join us like Vegeta do. That would be awsome~ ~Thank You~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story sounds promising but you really need to look for a beta reader. Your grammar and spelling mistakes really ruin the story. |
![]() ![]() I like it. Really good, I'd be a bit of a jerk and try to edit the typos for you, but there are a few issues I have: 1. How did Broly know about Frieza and Bardock when all that happened when he and Goku were born? 2. How did Gohan know Broly's name? I would've named him something else, maybe Gohan Jr? Just throwing it out there. Overall, I really like it. Not bad |
![]() ![]() when will it be ready i like it keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Its all right we all make mastakes |
![]() ![]() Are goku and broly going to see echo their again |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who were you referring to at the end of this chapter? Broly asked Gohan if he knew what his power was at and yelled it was over 9k but the ending credits you stated Goku when angry was at 600, I have to ask, huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story isn't bad; it's the execution. I'd try to find a beta reader. As much as the concept interests me, I had to stop reading halfway through just to rest my eyes. |
![]() ![]() Really you quit that sucks |
![]() ![]() Come on with these power levels man nappa wasn't even 8000. Raditz going 10000 is to much ridiculous |
![]() ![]() This is not the same goku from the Dragonball z universe at all... I'm not sure how I feel about the developments of this chapter. |
![]() ![]() Despite the numerous spelling errors and the power levels being both to high and to low. This has been an enjoyable series so far. This chapter has got me exited |