The last sentence cracked my up.

Eh any story that Makes me physically and mentally cringe is automatically off my reading list sorry not sorry. I knew from chapter 1 that this wasn't going to be a serious fic and that's what I was hoping for honestly BUT I guess I just can't handle fics where the MC has an IQ below 50 *shrugs* The things they are saying the way they explain things are so over the fucking top It's too much and don't even get me started on everyone elses reaction to what they say and do.

"why they never needed proper medical attention to begin with because they simply don't need it."

They didn't need medical attention because they didn't need it? That's some logic

"If there was one thing Jason discovered about the Normandy, it was the fact that there was more than two areas of the ship accessible via the elevator"

You should have just said "Jason discovered that there were more than two 'floors' on the Normandy."

You also misspelled Turian. Again. Seriously, how do you turn a sound like Tur-i-an into Turain every single time you've used it?

"Not one to be determined,"

Don't you mean, like, dismayed or dissuaded? Because saying that your protagonist is "not to be determined" really doesn't make sense.

Also, I think you spelled Turian wrong every time you typed it. That's kind of impressive, honestly.

Get back on this, will ya?

awesome story please update

Very good please finish it _

Great story dude!

You really need to tell us what "sweat drop" and "tear drop" means.

Jane was on the guns at the beginning of Therum, but once they land it's John telling her not to run over the Geth.

"Thor, are you arguing with the narrator?"
"He started it."
"Did not."
"Did too!"

Need more chapters Please

When will you continue the story? It's good and I will like to see it finished.

So, why are the Turians called Turains in your work? What happened to change the name of the species? Because you use Turains more than you do Turians.

Incredible story needs to be updated soon