This.. is awesome. I mean. I love pewds and all, but its cool how you didn't just put that pewds is the hero, and actually, sometimes, i love teary ending -

This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I read it a few months ago. Even coming back today and reading the ending again made me upset and sad. That really shows that even if we didn't know who this girl was (obviously you), you really made the audience feel for her as well as Cry. The character development is absolutely incredible. Great job! :D

HOLY SHET. You did make me cry though. /: I loved it though. It was great. :3

That was awesome! XD It was a little hard to follow at times, but I think that was mostly my fault because I didn't know the girls, I'm not much of a computer wiz, and no one knows what Cry looks like.
That last slender part, OMG, freaked me out! I felt like I was watching someone play it, but in real life, which made it even scarier! I just wasn't sure who it was supposed to be at the end. I think it was Pewds? Maybe add a thing about his eye color or something besides just glasses to make it easier to figure out? Thank you so much for this! I can tell you put a lot of work into it, and you did a fantastic job! :D

Wow...sad...deppressing...amasing...talented...off the charts...and totally kickin ass...SWEEEET...please you must make more...

This was cool as fuck. You should make a second chapter.