You could add to this story by adding another 11 chapters showing Marty growing up (in the same way) in the 'improved' timeline that 'Calvin Klein' made. This is a great story.

Wow daga voo

Great, thank you for completing it

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THIS IS ADORABLE
AND COOL
very realistic, as you can get for imagined backstory for a film but it stays hugging canon a bit without going to crazy on liberties

also I can totally see Marty becoming friends with Doc from bringing back his dog.

I look forward to the next update

I liked this. Well done.

I always reread chapter 11 and look everyday twice to see when ur posting the next chapter this is making me live in life and that sounds really weird but this is an amazing story that's never been thought of before and I really wanted to ask if u could make another chapter

Geeze, it's taken me ages to leave a review for these final two chapters, but I thought they were great! The chapter in which Doc goes to teach Marty how to drive is very sweet (at the end, anyway, not the bit where George disappoints his son again). You show well how Doc and Marty have grown close, and are now fairly used to each other's habits and so on, e.g. Doc knowing to wait for Marty to have his outburst; Marty being used to Doc's large vocabulary, etc. Marty and Jennifer interacting for the first time was also cute! You made Jennifer interesting, which I guess might be a difficult thing to manage sometimes, since the movies gave her so little screen time. All in all, I loved reading this story; it was very well-written! If you ever decide to write another story for this fandom, I'd definitely come back to read it, but regardless of whether you do or not, I'm really glad you wrote this one! Good luck in college! :)

I am in love with this story! Please keep writing it.

YES! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE LAST CHAPTER. I has been reading this story since the beginning and I have one request. When, and if, Marty meets Jennifer in this next chapter can he almost hit her with the car. It's not like I don't like Jennifer but it will be just like the movie. So he can almost hit Jennifer, doc can make up some lame excuse to leave them alone and then they become friends and then later in time they start to date. That's my idea so thanks if you use it.

PLEASE WRITE MORE! THSI story is my life and I check everyday and it makes my day when there is a new chapter. I can't wait to see what happens. If you could write more that would be awesome.

This is horrible. Well, not the writing, but the events in the story. Poor Marty. You really captured the worst parts of having a wimpy father like George McFly.

Woo, another chapter! Don't worry about it taking longer than you meant it to, real life happens to us all! It's great how you manage to write Marty so convincingly at so many stages of his life, from when he was pretty much a baby and continuing right up through his teenage years. You've got all the little changes in perspective and opinions and so on that happen when people get older, but all of it is recognisably Marty the whole way through.
I also like that you've introduced Needles in this chapter, with him being the only one at school who seems to halfway accept Marty, which then makes it understandable why Marty would want to complete all these dares Needles throws his way so that he doesn't get rejected by him and end up with no one around at school. It's also good foreshadowing too, with what we know about Needles from the movies.
You're really great at descriptive language; I can easily picture everything in my head as I read this chapter, and I love how you described Strickland as having "the head of a cue-ball and the gaze of an angry bear", because that is really accurate as well as imaginative!...Sorry about this gigantic wall of text I've left as a review; I ramble a lot when I read stuff that I like. I don't really want this story to end, but I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

OMG! This is the best story ever! I just read all 8 chapters and I'm really want more! Please write more!

Can you please write more of this story? This is the best story I have ever read. If other people say stop writing it, remember that I want to read it. So please write more chapters.

Please write more! This is amazing!