Awesome and sad, perfect.

I never would have thought of this. But now that I've seen it, I want to see more of it. Any chance of a continuation?

Keep up the great work!

Good job.

The feels bro the feels

... Damn that's good. But I have this strange feeling that Carmne has her own chapter in form of Bloddy Magpies and allay in form of Trollyzun the Infinite.

On the other note. Any chances that Car,men might stolen sutch trivall things like Tzenneth list of plots? Khorne axe? Isha? Gork or Mork?

This is fantastic. I'm amazed that you made this crossover work, somehow.

Please let it be a full story
Potential to be epic especially with female marines

...there are no words to describe how awesome this story is!:D:D:D

Carmen Santiago as the GEoM's daughter? Now there's something I've NEVER seen before! Great work!

like it

Wow! Considering its a crossover between Where on Earth is Carmen Sandiego and a franchise I don't give much of a stuff about you managed to cram a lot of 'feels' into this little story.

Very good.

Thanks for sharing.

Well that was odd, maybe I should sign in before not during the reviewing process

Very impressively unique fanfiction I ever read.

Awesome one-shot.
Interesting in making Carmen the Emperor's daughter.

Heheh. Where In The Galaxy Is Carmen Sandiego?

You are off your rockers dude.
Nice story, as always.