I really liked this! the pacing, plot, and characterization was phenomanol [please excuse mispellings]. The amount of work you put into this is amazing for such a high-quality piece of art. Your weak point, i beleive, was your description. I do not have vivid, concrete images or sensory details pop into my mind as I read this. Show don't tell. One note on formatting: i think you use the "~~O~~" unnecessarily often. Thank you for writing this and motivating me to write my second longest review ever!

Great fic!
You should change it from a crossover to simply a avengers fic, though. That way more people will see it and you will gain more readers. It isn't REALLY a crossover. You might have used elements of Brave, but it is not neccesary to mark it as a crossover.

So this part of the tale has reached an end, but you've already laid the foundation for the next story in this 'verse!

I really enjoyed this. The spells cracked me up.

Oh, the ending :') I loved the ending! And the cats... I can't even begin to state the perfection of the cats :'D

I don't suppose you're considering a sequel? Maybe Ainsley getting drafted in as a SHIELD agent in the future or something dramatic like that? Possibly a tad far fetched... but it'd be cool!

Thanks again for an awesome story; I've loved every second!

I loved this chapter. Like, a lot. It was brilliant and fantastic though I'm slightly worried that there will be some huge plot twist in the near future... I love Clint, Natasha and Ainsley as a little family :') can't wait for more!

I read this chapter through my fingers, you like when you watch sexy scenes on TV or movies or when something is so scary?! The ending had me screaming at my monitor!

Don't you dare leave Natasha alone to raise their recently conceived child (I know they have all that action they've had without their clothes on)!

FIX IT NOW!

LOL You're good, I think you're about done and you do this :D Great job!

*SOB* the picture, the farewell.

*snicker* Gilroy, well played.

The towel had me LOL'ing.

The drugged up Clint was so very sad.

You are killing us with this chapter ending! Oh my.

The telling of their story... loved it, all the bits and pieces. *snort* remembering Nick.

I honestly don't understand how this fic has so few reviews! Its so good! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

GREAT CHAPTER! Oh wow, so much in so few words. My heart is pounding!

Are they going to tell her? Oh Ainsley! Clint and Nat you are scaring and worrying your daughter!

OH MY GOSH! This story is sooo amazing! You have to keep going, this is absolutely just GAAAAHHH AMAZING! AAAHHH THE FEELS! You're an amazing writer, I love this! I can't even... Wow! FRICKIN 500 STARS!

Enjoying your story. Gonna have to go back through though. Thought I caught a Jeremy Renner movie reference in one of the earlier chapters but thought I was imagining things, at least until the swimming scene, when she tells him he talks too much. :D Don't know anything about Scarlet Johansen so I don't know if you're using hers as well. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

this is fantastic! i love the characters and i love the authenticity of the whole thing. i love that they didn't just take ainsley/annabelle with them, and i love how you've woven the comic 'verse in with the movie 'verse.
i caught the 'merida and eleanor' reference :) seems scotland's got a couple other famed redheaded women in their midst.
anyway, i am looking forward to the rest and thoroughly enjoyed what i've read so far! apologies for the lack of capitalization, my phone keyboard is acting up.