omg I love this so much! I read this three days non stop from chapter 1 to 54, and I still want more! Your writing style is amazing, too! And the story keeps me reading and reading. Love how you portray the characters and their interactions just like how I imagine them to be. Please, will you continue it? I'm still very curious to know what will happen to Hope and the others.

Wow, I'm honestly super enthralled by this fic. I haven't read much with this depth and character understanding, especially not in this fandom. I love it and I truly hope you'll continue it, I'm really interested to see how all of it plays out. I love how much thought you've put into it, and none of the characters seem ooc at all, it honestly feels like all of this could happen. Plus your writing style is clear and captivating. Sending love

Are you ever going to finish this story?

The goddess Etro not the daughter of Bhunivelze. She was made in the image of his mother who he pushing in to chaos his mother did not die his mother Soul fractured in two different versions of her personality and took on the appearance of yeul. Different bits and pieces of a soul when he realized that he needed his mother's help to control the chaos when Bhunivelze realize could not Control the Chaos he made a goddess in his mother's image and then prisoner in Valhalla so she could control life and death Chris Bhunivelze was afraid of it and that's why I want destroyed on top of that he also knew if we destroyed it makes humans more free to subliminal control because the chaos resides in The Souls of all the humans within the world of Gran pulse the knowledge of people have learned from if those Souls disappear they become blank slates that he can put his own suggestion on to them and that is what he wanted subordinates to worship Him Sono the goddess Etro was not his daughter but his slave and prisoner just so you know and this is what I got from playing all three games the real story with in the story if you don't believe me give it a try sometime but you gotta know where to look and how to find it thank you and good job with the story anyways call fanfiction

Did you look up the original version(Japanese version) of the 13th day with Hope and Lightning and the end scene with Hope, Lightning and Bhunivelze because in that version makes way more sense than the English/American Version!
Also make more chapters I want to see what happens with hope

To be honest, I don't like court session scenes (both in real life and in fiction) because of how easy people who weren't present to witness the events themselves twisted statements to suit their purpose, regardless of what the witnesses actually mean. My reaction is somewhat similar with Noel's in this.

I love the part at the beginning where Caius called lil Noel 'little hunter'. Sounds like a pretty Caius thing to say

An update! And a good one, if one with some weird formatting... (or maybe that's just my screen spazzing out, idk).

Hope got tons of feelings unexpressed here... Light is his sorta-mother figure and she herself isn't the most honest person. I hope hanging around Noel will get him to open up more

This was one of the first fics I read on the ffxiii trilogy. I started it sometime mid last year and burned through the chapters you've done great so far! You've done a great job showing the real family feelings between light, snow, serah, and hope. Lightning really seems like hopes mom and I hope you're able to get past your blocks to show what happens with Sylvia. Seriously pulling for fang and vanille to uncrystallize too! Don't rush it though I'd rather see a chapter every few months done right! Keep it up

thank you for this amazing read! youve got great writing talent :)

Etro! I Love this story so much. Seeinng into Hope and everyone's personallity and feelings really makes you more empathatic to the plights they have to deal with. Especially great to see Hope dealing with new problems.

I'm also very pleased in an evil way to see the L'Cie unraveling abbout finding ut how Hope was abandoned by them all. They keeping the alternate world from Hope is an act of betrayal already. Will Hope choose to sacrifice himself to Sylvia to keep the safe? Will the unborn baby pay a big case in the court's choice?

How will Lightning react to Hope knowing the alternate world? I think I'm only saying this but I would like to see Lightning and Hope"s relationship getting more intimate, probably saying this because I love Hoperai but this is something I would truly want to see. (Not saying how to write your story and I already know about the Platonic Relationship statement.)

Please Update Soon!

Sorry for your loss.

I'm really glad to see this story continued, it's always great.
I'm so sorry to hear about your loss. Please be sure to take care of yourself first and foremost. I wish you and your family the best.

I like how you put the story together, especially the beginning of each chapter where it displays insights into each character's thoughts and worries and all the whirlwinds of emotions left unexpressed.
From the first chapter, I thought this will be something akin to a one-shots collection that tells the story of everyday's occurrence. Glad to know there's a bigger picture waiting for an unveiling.
I hope to see the continuation soon :). It was a great read, thanks.

Yay! It's back! I really like this story... please update (sooner this time! ;D)

I just finished reading all 52 chapters in one day!

This is just wonderful and seeing how you love short and to the point chapters, I think I'm going to wait awhile until I see more than one chapter update to read this wonderful story.

I always love when I find myself getting caught up in a good 1st person point of view story; especially when it's multiple POVs; its like I told another before, it takes a great type of story told from a 1st person narrative to keep my interests. As I'm not too keen in being invested in them; but wow not only is it done so artistically well here; it really keeps you guessing.

Like I can't even begin to star to name everything I'm curious to know about!

Just when you think you figure something out in this story, more things unanswered questions pop up! Like what is the real deal with this Sylvia lady? why so obsessed with Hope?

Is she one of the Fal'Cie gods that herald Bhunivelze? Is she really Mywn? Etro?
Could she be a 'reincarnation of Nora'!? Some other omnipotent being we haven't heard of yet?

Speaking of Nora, I have a feeling that she's 'Toughie' the girl in the photo standing next to Lightning's father. And now I'm getting this suspicion that the brother Bartholomew mentioned Nora visiting in Bodhum is 'Nickie' and that, they would really mean that Hope, Light and Serah are cousins in this story...and by some odd fate something happened that cut the ties with the family (like Nicholas being the 'blacksheep' of a prestigious family that wanted nothing to do with him and his kin, god this sounds like a K-Drama), otherwise I just can't see Nora abandoning Light and Serah, her nieces to fend for themselves after (or if she even knew) their parents passed away.

Or maybe the two were close friends? Maybe this mysterious brother of hers was actually Snow's father? I dunno, there's so much going on here.

And with how this story is going, anything is possible.

And I cannot repeat myself enough about how much I cannot wait to see where you take this.

I'll be looking out until then;

D-Butterfly