Heyyy! I just read this first chapter, and it sounded quite interesting. But this is discontinued, right? Since there aren't any more chapters? :)

It's a great story so far, add i can't wait to read what comes next! Just promise me one thing: you're not going to make the whole story rhyme, are you?

This sounds like an interesting set up. I would like to see how it turns out.

This story is looking very interesting :) Can't wait til the next chappie! Just out of curiosity, will the whole story be written in poetry form or just the prologue/first chapter? I like it both ways, but I can't help but wonder ;)