Also, the Hunt wouldn't accept any males, and even if it is a guardian, they would most likely be female, though a Percy genderbend would ruin the story, at least for me.

(A/N) you actually didn't take much of a diversion of the, 'leaving the hunt because of a prank'. it was just slightly changed to be disrespect, which Percy shouldn't care for.

Wait so you mean to tell me that Percy is getting involved with the Hindus

this, I didn't expect.

That was a stupid way to kill of raktveeja ... seriously that weapon is powerful but if the clones get mad and destroy each other wont there be more bloodshade and more clones being born eventually.
Why do you think kali drank his blood ? For her amusement , no rather to prevent their re-spawning.
It would have been a better way if you wrote percy drowned them or froze them in ice. No bleeding there and games up for the demon.

It's Greek not Indian dumb fuck

Awesome!

How did Karna's armor disappear? In the myths it was stated even the Indian gods the equivalent to Greek primordials were unable to inflict damage to his Kavacha and Kundla(that's why Lord Indra had to trick Karna into giving it up in charity) let alone destroy it. Swarnamani was a possession of Lord Krishna, why would it be a myth/? I am no trying to invalidate you but am genuinely curious why are you trying to downplay the strength of Indian Gods? Also if Vritra had resurrected where was Lord Indra? Vritra mighty be mighty and strong but taking away the lifeforce of Immortals was the function only weapons stronger than Brahmashtra could do(including Brahmastra of course). How could Vritra do this? Moreover Vritra was a vedic-era demon if he was back then so will Mritra and other Vedic gods should be back too by the law of equality of Chaos and Order. Another inconsistency I noticed was with Lord Vishnu's role here, while everything, wasn't the creator that was lord Brahma's job. Lord Brahma while born from Lord Vishnu's navel was still the creator and greek equivalent to Chaos. It would do justice to Indian readers if you could replace the name of Lord Vishnu with lord Brahma.

Now all shortcomings aside, i still would say it is a great story. The plot is enjoyable, is diverse, imaginative and uses some extraordinary level of efficiency. It might be a good idea to involve lord Indra, Varuna and Hanuman here to piss Zeus off showing their overwhelming power and virtues despite such power. It might also be a good idea to try and invoke Lady Durga here but somehow Mahishshura fails the plot but weakens himself to stop the ritual. Let's see how this turns out but I feel it gotta be one hell of a story

My friend, I appreciate your stories and your imagination. still I would like to remind you of the facts regarding Varunastra, it could be used/summoned only once by a mortal (demigods are mortals too in Indian myths) plus Arjuna wasn't the owner of varunastra, Lord Varuna was. Even he himself said that no mortal could wield it twice. Would you make a correction regarding this. Another thing with Hallahala is only Lord Shiva had the power to contain it, it was that Potent and giving lord Shiva the status of a Primordial is unjustified, he could fry Primordials with his eye, remember Kama(the Indian version of Eros(primordial of love) was burnt by his third eye, yes a Primordial burnt to ashes). Another thing with Hallahala is it was produced by the serpent Vasuki how did Mhishshura acquire it as Vasuki was always stationed on Lord Shiva's neck?

Lord Varuna was far more powerful as he was the ruler of everything before Lord Indra came. He was the King of the Universe in Vedic times. All the Indian gods are comparable to Greek Primordials. Varuna to Pontus, Agni- no comparison, Indra- Ouranos, besides in the Indian legends Bhoomi (the Earth goddess comparable to Gaia was peaceful, awake but friendly). I like the idea of your story. I am from India. I would like to partner with you on this story.

A lot of this is reminding me of Queen's Champion

I think that the Norse thing is a little weird for the ones that came out long before the first Magnus Chase book was written. I mean I could understand Egyptian and Greek crossovers, Alexander the Great did conquer Egypt after all, but why Norse, if it had to do with the Nordic influence in Yugioh 5ds then that makes no sense in terms of a logical connection.

I've just read through the entire story it's good you have my follow and fav good job keep it up

your story is mesmerising and your allegations to indian mythology too.
i have wanted to read such a fanfic for a long time.

not bad