Reviews for Heroic Kitsune
Guest chapter 5 . 9/13
Personally I think Batgirl would fit in better than Blackfire or Galatea, Batgirl's into crazy friendly guys, and personally while I think Galatea's backstory makes more sense than Karen Zor-L (a clone of Supergirl makes more sense than a futuristic Supergirl from another dimension traveling via Boom Tube, which doesn't have dimensional capabilities in the first place), Karen Zor-L has the best personality, she IS Kara Zor-El from another universe so she has Kara's Kryptonian ingenuity and intellect, but she behaves much like a rich socialite, Galatea is Superboy with tits.

Also, Madara Uchiha wouldn't even be a minor threat in DC, he'd be taken out so fast his Sharingan wouldn't even see it coming. Keep in mind, Superman is so fast that unless you're on the other side of the world, he can appear in front of you in a millisecond and he's so powerful he'd punch straight through Susano'o and Uchiha with one hit. Fact's about Superman, he can fly to the moon within mere seconds, he can lift three times the weight of the Earth itself, and his full powered Heat Vision has the destructive power of ten nuclear payloads, bottom line, Superman in canon is the Bad Ass of Bad Asses, not even Darkseid can take him in an all-out fight, Darkseid has to result to trickery, he is infinitely more powerful in comics than he is portrayed in cartoons, even the recent animated movies which are showing more of his badassery than the shows did. Put it simply, Superman would bend Kaguya over and make her his bitch, so Madara wouldn't hold a candle.

Also, keep in mind UNTIL he became the new Sage of Six Paths, Madara only won through cheap tricks, until he became the new Sage of Six Paths he was an undead corpse, who kept reviving after being destroyed, he basically used that to tire his opponent out, had a LIVING Madara faced Naruto when Naruto first entered the battlefield, he'd be dead before he could blink. Naruto DID destroy Madara on MULTIPLE occasions, but Madara was an Edo Tensei Corpse that kept reanimating, and even after he absorbed Obito's powers, Madara still was no match for Naruto in terms of raw strength, he had to keep using Limbo to avoid Naruto because simply put, Naruto would have destroyed him. Also Itachi is no better, keep in mind when he and Kisame used those 'dead puppet clones' to attack Naruto's group, those clones were forty percent of their power, and Naruto destroyed Itachi's in an instant, after he and Kakashi fooled Itachi's Sharingan, Naruto obliterated his dead puppet with a single Rasengan, if that was FORTY PERCENT of his power, then it wouldn't take much more for Naruto to destroy Itachi at full power. People keep forgetting, Itachi, Madara, Pein, and Sasuke were just cheap little tricksters, no different than Loki from Marvel or Aizen from Bleach, Jiraiya, Naruto, Orochimaru, and even Sarutobi were freaking powerhouses and in the end, power always wins over cheap tricks, because eventually you're going to piss the powerhouse off to the point they just obliterate you and everything around you, "Injustice: Gods Among Us" is a PERFECT example of this, eventually they pissed the Blue Boy Scout off until he just unleashed all that rage and power on everyone.
Primarx chapter 10 . 4/15
liked reading it. hope u'll finish it one day
Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2019
I have to disagree with you about Fugaku and Itachi.

Itachi and the main Uchiha in the series (Sasuke, Madara, Obito) were total losers, all of them played like puppets. I cannot see the logic behind Itachi's massacre, had he warned his clansmen of Obito, Obito would not have succeeded in massacring them and they could have nipped Danzo's plotting in the bud, the Uchiha had a number of powerful Sharingan wielders including Fugaku, they could have used their Sharingan to identify the weakness in Obito's Kamui, probably faster than Minato did, and ended that disgrace of a clansmen permanently, and if Fugaku realized Danzo was using them to plot against Sarutobi, he'd have joined forces with Sarutobi and probably been seen as heroes in the village for ousting a REAL traitor. Not to mention, the Hyuga could have been a tremendous help during multiple instances in Konoha were they still alive and running the police force, they could have assisted in the Sand-Sound Invasion as well as Pein's Onslaught, something we witnessed in Tsunade's dream sequence, all Itachi did was hurt Naruto more, the son of his mother's best-friend, rob his little brother of his parents (for which I do feel sorry for Sasuke for but that's it), and tremendously weakened his village.

I honestly HATE any bullshit excuse to paint Itachi as a hero, his actions remind me of Machiavellianist politicians of old, too much subterfuge that is absolutely pointless and makes no sense when in the end the outcome was clear and simple... he could have warned his clan and dealt with the traitors to strengthen both his family and his village.

Fugaku on the other hand was not the villain he was made out to be, he plotted against Konoha because he felt the Senju weakness was leading both his clan and his village to their demise, and HE WAS RIGHT! Sarutobi allowed Konoha to blame the Uchiha for the Kyubi attack and alienate one of their most powerful clans as well as create dissention within the village. He allowed Hizashi to die because he was too spineless to step up to the Raikage and ask WHY THE HELL IS YOUR NINJA SNEAKING AROUND A CLAN YOU HAVE A HISTORY OF TERRORIZING WHILE HE'S IN COMBAT GEAR IF HE'S SUPPOSED TO BE AN AMBASSADOR OF PEACE?!

Then their's Naruto, while Danzo's idea of Naruto being a weapon was stupid, Hiruzen KNEW someone was after Naruto, someone capable of RELEASING KURAMA and KILLING A SQUAD OF ANBU ALONG WITH HIS OWN WIFE, yet Sarutobi did NOT EVEN TRAIN NARUTO, Hell, he didn't even tell Naruto the secret of the Shadow Clones. So YES, Fugaku had a really good reason to overthrow Sarutobi if nothing more than to keep the 'Idiot Professor' from self-destructing the village.

However, I do agree with fanfics using Fugaku as a villain, it's easy to do since we didn't learn of his heroic yet underhanded plans until the end of the series and even then, it's anime based not manga, but I can't stand people portraying Itachi as a hero, he's a cowardly regecidal sociopath who did more harm than good and deserves to rot in Hell knowing he turned his own little brother into a bigger traitor.
Chue19 chapter 10 . 5/21/2019
Hope u continue writing this story it's good.
Borello chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
the story is great. i hoped to read more chapter.
ndavid chapter 10 . 2/17/2018
Muito bom
DukeSomerset chapter 10 . 2/9/2018
please update
RespectMyWaifu chapter 10 . 12/16/2017
You should continue this.
HyperspaceGamer chapter 4 . 8/17/2017
So, does Connor/Superboy not exist in the story/universe, with Galatea/Powergirl taking his place, or was he just not rescued from Cadmus?
Ryujomaru15 chapter 10 . 7/23/2017
Very interesting story so far can't wait for it to develop.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/15/2017
You should feel bad for not updating this truly amazing amusing story
Grim24 chapter 2 . 5/11/2017
this is stupid dumbest story i've ever read it's the worst of all...
GED chapter 10 . 5/5/2017
like thiswork i hope that we see it updated one day! also hope for your other works too i'm a great fan!
carwash36 chapter 10 . 4/19/2017
This fic is awesome, hope you update this soon
Guest chapter 10 . 1/4/2017
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