Man I just loved this so much! I love how the characters start out and in many ways remain close to their counterparts in the show, but they are also your characters. The character growth and story arcs were fantastic. Sure there were some cheesy parts, but I freaking loved this story!

This chapter was so good! I just love these nice little moments between all of the craziness.

I've just spent the last 5 days binge reading this and...wow! How lucky I was to stumble across it! Thank you for all your hard work, your writing is amazing and I will most definitely be reading all your other fics!

I love it! This was awesome. I love your stories!

BUT LESTRID! WHY?!

I'm almost at the end of this story and it's my favourite! I love ROC as well, but that's more slow burning lol. and this one picks up after the show was so great to me, so...Belle and R get married!and everyone survives that has since ch58! except Blue

What?! You mean the Blue Fairy actually admitted to not being perfect?! What kind of a fanfiction is this?

sorry I come late to this fic, but u killed me with chapter 43...damn I hate to love u!

You nail the characters personalities down really well. I can picture each character doing and saying what they do. That's really good ability as a writer

poor Rumple, you are having him going through hell in this storyloving it so far!

Hm. And here I was thinking that room was a trap. It may still be. I hope not, though. If it is, they may be in for a nasty surprise. If he's being kept down there, the Black Fae may very well have the dagger.

Stupidly honorable nobles. It's going to get them killed. I understand on a diplomatic level. Still, they should have hidden their own army, since it was bound to be an ambush.

Oh, my. I like your version of the yer in the Enchanted Forest very much. Canon setts only glossed over it, but things must have happened then. If what is hinted at actually happens, this should be fun. Henry and Emma in the world that they should have grown up in but did not. You have a Swanfire angle in FOTS. I'm going to hope the same holds true here. I don't mind Captain Swan. I even like Hook. I still think Swanfire has more chemistry, however.

This was before Camelot and Merlin, right? Honestly, this sounds more interesting. It looks like you put a lot of thought into the mistletoe of magic and the like.

Thank you.

A very interesting story. I like how you stayed true to the character, smarter is better than power, while still managing to maintain the all magic comes with a price. I feel you were able to stay true to the feel of the show while at the same time making it all your own. Good Job.