I loved the story!

For chapter thirteen your ripping off the finale

I was right, I love this!

I have a feeling that I'm gonna love this!

How on Earth did this get so many views? Good story. The escape tunnel was kind os silly though.

Oh i hope Mal doesnt cause more trouble outside my brain then he did in the inside. Far fetched and terribly written. If I could get out of here I would come and smash whatever you are using to write this crap. Toodles.

Who the heck is related to Mal!? really... Who? i mean like someone like Vito or ... what will it be called ( I don't like phoning the computer police to help me)

It was the wizard of oz! Lmao it took me to page 13 to realize that! xD

Oh COME ON! It's repeating everything from the start. Just please save them, be quick about it, and make sure Mal DIES!

How can they outsmart Mal somehow? There has to be a way to kill him.

Good work! I'm glad Mike won. :) Can't wait for the sequel!

Nice ending. Loved the story!

You said this was after season 5 right? But the island sank in the season finale, how on earth did they get it back up anyway? And why does it seem like every time Mike and his team make a plan, Mal is always one step ahead of them. I hope Mal DIES!

That was funny, update soon.

I like how you had Zoey burn down Mal's castle. But what happened to all the guards? Oh please tell me their not dead. That's just to sad. Anywho, I can't wait to see where and what Mal's gonna do next. So exciting! Awesome job. :)