it was a perfect little story ! Of course only Jasper could have helped Carlisle with something like it

WUUUUHUUUU i like this story please update

Very nice chapter, and I can't wait for the next chapter, especially if it is going to be uploaded so soon. The only major issue with you grammar I could see was that you missed an apostrophe near the end: "Jaspers words " should be "Jasper's words" (I bet you're getting quite sick of me and my pedantry aren't you?).
There was something in the plot of this chapter that confused me as well. I don't really understand why Carlisle's old house is still standing. I would have thought it would have been knocked down and made into a new home or something by now. Or is it something to do with the fact that it was the house of a pastor, and has been preserved because of that?
Also, in your last big paragraph, about Carlisle feeling Esme's love, I don't quite understand how that works. Is Esme there as well, because your sentence "With ... Esme... by my side" implies that she is. If she isn't, how is he feeling that? Is Jasper projecting the feeling of love Esme has for Carlisle, which he has memorized, or something?

Please update! You said when you posted this that the updates would be more frequnt now, but this has been the longest wait. I hope that you are OK and are able to update again soon, as this is a really good story.

Please update! I'm dying for another chance to correct your (albeit very infrequent) grammar mistakes! :p

I was beginning to get worried that you weren't going to update but thank god, you have! This was a really nice chapter, I always like to see the other characters' opinions of Jasper and in his struggle. In the books I always felt like they made Jasper seem really weak, but in your interpretation, you show how he is in fact very strong.
I'd suggest that, at the start of the second paragraph of this, you should perhaps put mistrustful rather tan un-trustful. Personally, I have never heard of the word un-trustful and I therefore think it makes the sentence sound strange, like you didn't know a real word to put there.
I wouldn't say that your uploading schedule is particularly slow, I know of others who are a lot worse than you. Also, as you have been generally quite regular with when you have been updating, each one about a month after the last, that has helped me to know when to be on the lookout for your story.
Thanks for updating!

Wow...really nce chapter
I love ur style of writing... :-D

I loved Jasper's story...and even more d bond dat is developing btw Carlisle and Jasper...
:-D

I love how jasper is being very open to carlisle about himself

Firstly, thank you so much for updating this story, I love it. Secondly (and I'm sure you know what's coming by now), grammar! The only real issue I saw in this chapter was that, near the start, you put "make sure that there children lived...". You should have used "their" istead of "there". Here's how to remember which to use:
"There" is to do with a place, i.e. "here and there"
"Their" means belonging to them. They are the children belonging to them so they are "their" children.
"They're" simply means "they are".
Other than that, I really liked the technique you used of Jasper telling the story as if he wasn't speaking about himself. As well as giving a nice effect to the reader, it shows that perhaps the memories were too painful for him to admit that the boy in the story was him.
Again, thanks for writing, please update as soon as humanly possible and I hope this review is of some use to you.

That was really sweet of Jasper. Thank you for this amazing story,

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I have to admit, at the beginning i thought carlisle was talking about himself but as soon as the war and the word 'southern' was mentioned, i realised that it was jasper talking. Great job, carlisle and jasper really do have a few things in common

Please update! I can't wait to see what this story is that Jasper is going to tell Carlisle!

love seeing Jasper help his dad

great job and awesome fic

God bless

Another lovely chapter. I'm intrigued to see what story this is that Jasper is going to tell Carlisle.
Just one issue with grammar that I noticed in this chapter:
you put "It was quite for a moment" when you mean "It was quiet for a moment". It's a very easy mistake, and one that you might not notice, even with a spell checker, as they are both legitimate words.
I also really liked your inclusion of "the Mexican War" and Jasper's memories of it. It seems like a really believeable and realistic thing for Jasper to do.