Love what you have written so far. Would love to read more. Hope you find your way back to completing this story.

Hope everything is alright! Love your story thus far, please update soon

jasper is going to have to kill edward.

i knew it !

i hope he corners mike in the john and rips out his spine!

of course edward will get into it. just because he can't be with bella doesn't mean he wants jasper to have her. he doesn't, he will always want her to be a virgin human.

plz update

Wonderful story, and I hope that rl lets you come up with the final chapters. Look forward to the denouement!

Love it so far.

Please add more chapters to this book would love to see what happens with Bella and jasper and to see if Edward and Alice get what is coming to them and to see if Edward and Alice get there head taken off for trying to keep mate's apart

Hugs for the pain you are going through. I remember that pain well. I am sorry. Keep your head up and it will get better even if it doesn't seem that was right now! About the story, it was amazing as usual! Can't wait for more!

Your Alice and Eddie are interestingly manipulative here. It's new that Carlisle was the one that thought they'd use Victoria to go after Bella. The Volturi added to that I didn't see coming. They'll need Peter and Charlotte sooner rather than later. I look forward to reading more.

can't wait for more

Jasper will never allow this, so this won't end well for them.

Love it. Please update soon :).