Read this story in like 3~4 hours and I'm not regretting it even if I should have been studying my physics XD. It was utterly adorable, fluffy, romantic, well thought out, a little sexy at times, in brief, more than qualifying to go on my favorite list. That scene where they asked each other questions was one of my favorites, I love this concept, and the way it ended was even better. I'm weak for married couples, I love it when the girls take that step. And your writing was really good too, fluid and giving a feeling of completeness.

I'm fairly new to yuri shipping in Pokemon, Cynthia x Dawn is pretty much the only pairing I know since they have quite a lot of fanarts on Dynasty-Scan (the yuri heaven), and I'm so glad you made Dawn over 18 years old, most of the other stories on FFN keep Dawn at like 15 and I just can't read that, because of the age gap and all. But anyways, Pokemon Platinum is one of my favorite games, it's like my childhood with Pokemon Yellow, so I liked going back in Sinnoh for some yuri :3. Though I played the game in French, so the names were a little confusing ha ha.

What made me go looking for yuri in the Pokemon franchise was the recent fanarts of the upcoming new game's female protagonist (the scottish girl) paired with Serena from Kalos. Even though I know nothing about them, as I didn't play a game farther than in Sinnoh, I still shipped them so hard ha ha. And here I am, found this amazing story, and I regret nothing. I see you don't have updated since about a year ago, and this chapter seemed like a conclusion to the story, but I'm still hoping to see more of your writing, be it in this story or in another one.

Keep up the good work,

~YFTW

P.S.: If you have some recommendations of yuri ships or stories in the Pokemon series, I'm all ears :3.

That interaction between Cynthia and Johanna. RIP my heart.

Aww these drabbles in Ch 17 were so adorable and sweet to read. Really enjoyable to see insight of how Cynthia's and Dawn's marrige would turn out in a shipper's point of view. Incredible work and hope to read more of this fanfiction in the future.

This is the cutest collection of short stories I've seen in a long time, I love it!

Awww! This was so freakin cute! I enjoyed binge reading your story and hope to read more in the future! This last chapter so far was soooooo heart warming and ADORABLE!

That was cute! I get happy whenever I see this story update :)

Loved it!

Unable to comprehend, too busy laughing.

This chapter was pretty funny. xD

I think a missed opportunity for this one though was not having Cynthia explain any of the Pokedex entires for the Litwick family, Gourgeist or Phantump. That would have been great. xD

This is really good as a romantic scene. It's wonderfully emotionally descriptive yet vague enough in terms of the actual sex to keep the rating fine. I like.

Okay, now for a proper review.
This story really is cute. It's the only one I have managed to read without getting bothered by how the first chapter was initiated so far. It was well proofread and is also quite well written. Writing style could have been more developed, though, but that just takes a bit more reading and practice so it's not much of an issue. Just mentioning that since this story is meant to be aimed towards a slightly older audience and so I found your current writing style to be slightly too simplistic. Nonetheless, the story lines for each of these prompts were nicely thought about and fit the main characters. Good gob :D

Pft. I noticed how you made Dawn a brunette. I guess I can try and imagine that... This is hard.

Awwwwwww

Nice read.

Game freak gave really conflicting entry on gorebyss. Feeds on seaweed...or stab prey to drink their blood..?

Still heh, poor girl should really know when to tease and when to taunt :p