Hey, mate! I really like this story! I agree with the part about not letting your OCs meet canon characters too often! I actually made my OC team go to Atlas Academy instead just so I could mostly avoid that, though Weiss makes a cameo and General Ironwood makes a couple too. In your story, I think it was a smart move to do away with the 4th wall breaks, those are the cringiest parts of the story. Overall, it's good! Keep writing, mate!

The part about the pencil case both relates to me and hurts me on a spiritual level.

i liked it, i read this fic in one go and was hilarious, the "action" parts were nice, the dialogue and interactions were funny, but now knowing is going end soon makes me sad, im not sure whats the problem with having both, we were just getting to know their backstory, for me is okay if there's drama on it (like something Drew stated before about students there having sad/dark backstories was common), is what made them to be like they are now, while is true that this fic started with other purposes and intend, is not rare to see histories changing slowly from the original goal, and seeing the underdogs or "losers" becoming a bit more competent was good to see (it makes them feel less stagnant and more dynamic as characters). but well, this is your story and you are the boss here, so i respect your decision, i will keep and eye for the final play of this team. see ya.

Alright, this is freaking hilarious already.

'Bella donna' is Italian for 'beautiful lady', not French. It is also the name of the nightshade plant.

One of the best RWBY. The concept of a misfit group is what I'm looking for. Sure, ideally you want the a group with the strongest members but sometimes a group like this where they actually have to put more effort into winning the day is a nice change of pace.

Personally, I would like to see this group cause more damage in the future. That, and more interaction with the canon cast.

Yeah that was a good Christmas chapter. Keep it up my friend.

talking about the basketballs lmao. great chapter, the detail was pretty good, and the plot was funny too. keep up the good work.

That KnB reference speech thing...

That was illogical but fun

I must say the team is crazy and certainly interesting.

I think I'm dying of anticipation! Can't wait for the next chap keep up the good work never tried reading about an actual OC team before. I'm glad yours was the first I read and also good luck with your future endeavours.

Yeah, thanks for the new chapter...although I want this to be canon again, and I want to get to some of the events on RWBY V2.
By the way, I bet Team JNPR makes it to the finals, because that way, they would be even against Team RWBY.

The fuck did I just read?

Can't wait for more, this is awesome!