please continue this story.

Awesome story. Update soon!

So are you gonna update anytime soon? It's actually a lot better than all of the other Max/ Twilight fanfics (no offence intended)

I don't mean to sound rude or anything, but I do suggest that you read over everything you write, as there are some spelling mistakes.
Other that this it is a great story, please update again soon.

This is a really good beginning please continue it !