Okay, by request of Terra, I have added one last comment by Robin's conscience with an alternate ending. Technically speaking, Terra
didn't ask for one more comment, she says that she just wished there
had been one more. So, I got to thinking about it and was all
"What the hell? Why not?" So here it is. It probably
sucks because I wrote it off the top of my head. I also wish to
recongnise SunShineStar for flaming. I must say though,
it didn't offend me one bit, if that's what you were aiming for.
Thank you very much. It only made me more determined to improve
my stories and keep writing. After all, it's just an
opinion. When I get 50 reviews, I promise I will respond to them
all. Now on with my crappy alternate ending!
Always,
RupertLover09
A Conversation with Robin's Conscience: Alternate Ending
You betrayed Batman! How could you betray him?
Shut up.
"I love you, Robin." Starfire murmured before she drifted off to sleep.
"I love you too, Star." Robin said as he closed his eyes
Noooooooooooooooooooooo! How could you do this?
When Raven walked into the living room a few hours later, she found the two of them asleep on the couch. Starfire was laying with her head in Robin's lap and Robin was sleeping with his head on his shoulder. Raven smirked. "It's about time." she whispered, patting Robin fondly on the head before going to make herself some herbal tea.
"TOFUUUUUUUUUU!" Beast Boy yelled, racing into the room.
Raven slapped a hand over his mouth and pointed to Robin and Starfire.
"Heheh...oops."
Okay, now I want your opinion. Should I or should I not write one in Starfire's point of view? Yes or No?
-RupertLover09