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Author has written 40 stories for Katekyo Hitman Reborn!, Pokémon, and Soul Eater. Hello, visitor! I'm LoveOneself. I'm just a small writer on this site. There's not much about me that stands out. Most of my stories focus on BL/Yaoi. If it isn't within your interest, I recommend on moving along. Also, please don't mind what is written below in this bio. I wrote this when I was much younger. Thanks for stopping by. There are some stories I'm writing about, but didn't put any information on it. But never mind that. I'm here to say that I am willing to take a request. Whatever the plot it is, I'll do it. As long as it's about Yamamoto and Tsuna. That's about it. You can send me a request in the PM or review on one of my stories. I'll see if I can. So, have a nice day/night. Please and thank you. If you want to know how I'm doing with my stories or just want to say hi, check out my LiveJournal account. I just recently made it so, I'm still learning. loveoneseslf315. Or I'm around facebook Scarlet And for my partner: Or if you are here to join the 8027 Famiglia, here is the link. Pet Peeves On Story I love reading the stories here. But there are some things that writers do that annoys me in their stories. Here's a list of it: 1.) Terrible Story Structure I'm fine with it most of the time. But it gets irritating when someone writes a sentence, enter, and writes another sentence on different lines. They just wasted space. I don't like it... And I want to read the detail! Most writers leave that out! That's the short version. For the long ones... Do you really want me to read something that looks like a box? Where are the spaces? I'm not going to sit and read something that is all mashed up together. Well, I would but I'm not going to last long on it. 2.) Grammar Is Not Like Texting A Friend Like the title, it's true. Writing a story is not like texting a friend. That means writers have to be careful about the grammar errors. And please proofread it. It's not going to kill you. If it did, I would have been dead long ago... 3.) Numbers and Languages I normally don't pay attention or mind to it, but it's getting noticeable. I don't know why, but I don't like numbers. Well, if someone writes it like 1,2,3,4,5,6... and such, I get irritated. It's a story. Writers are supposed to write it out. So, make it go like one, two, three, and such. I don't get why it's bothering me so much. This is the strangest one... Anyways, the languages. When you select English, you keep it in English. Don't mix it with other languages. How would you feel if someone wrote something and out of nowhere puts a sentence in a different language? Not fun anymore right? So, don't do it. It's either stays English or not at all. But if it was something important like an honorific or if it was part of the show or book then it's okay. But in other uses, no go with me... 4.) Forgetting The Plot Every writer should have one. If it's good, I can forget about the ones above. If it's not, I just wasted my time reading something that made no sense... Especially, when it was short and didn't follow any storyline whatsoever. There goes my time that I'll never get back... 5.) Mary Sue and Invincible Original Characters I'm sure everyone knows about this. No one likes Mary Sue. I sure don't. So don't add them. If you dislike them, would you add them to a story? No. That would make no sense... And I have a strong dislike to original characters that are written to be strong, unbeatable characters. Most original characters I've read has a dark past, distant personality, and some random powers that make them impossible to beat. It gets annoying to a certain point when a person reads it too much in an OC story. What makes your original character any different from the rest? At least have your OC earn the power later in the story. Because I don't want an anti-social, dark person being more important than the others. 6.) Proper Uses of Commas & Periods I've seen it happen before. And up till now too, so I doubt I won't see it in the future. But I'm not going to hold it against new writers. They're new. They need to learn things right? That's why we, the 'experts', should help them from preventing it. But if you're not new and continuing to not use a comma and a period properly... We need to have a talk. I've seen this a lot lately. Commas are not meant to be periods. Unless my English teacher comes to class saying that is true, I'm not buying. Most of the time I approve of it is when the character is talking, but stops and continues right after. That's it... Nothing else. If you do have that issue, please go to an English teacher (or an adult) and ask them about this and how you can fix it. That's my advice to you. There's more, but I'll stop here for now. |