Star of Fate
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Author has written 7 stories for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, and Black★Rock Shooter.

Yo! Name's Star of Fate - or Star - or Fate - either one works. I've been an avid reader of Fanfiction for two years now and after reading everyone else's stories, I've decided to take a chance at my own. Right now, I don't think I have the skill needed to create my own original story, so I'm taking the safe route with a parody series. I hope that as I move along in the series, I will get good enough to actually write my own stories. I'm always open to advice or critique - it can only help me improve.


Star-Nanoha Universe (Dimension-6647) - Destroyed in Nexus - Merged with Dimension-6457 Post-Nexus

Nanoha and the Blood of Panacea - COMPLETE

Nanoha Takamachi had never heard of magical machines. She never traveled to parallel dimensions, played a sport while flying in midair, or help hatch a dragon's egg. All Nanoha knows is a miserable life with the Henkens, her horrible aunt and uncle, and their abominable son, Kenta. Nanoha's room is the smallest corner of the basement and she has never had a birthday party in eleven years.

But all that is about to change when a mysterious letter arrives by a fairy messenger: a letter with an invitation to a wonderful place she never dreamed existed. There she finds not only friends, aerial sports, and magic around every corner, but a great destiny been waiting for her...if Nanoha can survive the encounter.

Nanoha and the Tomb of Shadows - COMPLETE

Ever since Nanoha Takamachi had come home for the holidays, the Henkens had been so mean and hideous that all Nanoha wanted was to get back to St. Hilde Academy of Magic. but just as she's packing her bags, Nanoha receives a warning from a strange blue alien who says that if Nanoha returns to St. Hilde, disaster will strike.

And strike it does. For in Nanoha's second year at St. Hilde, fresh torments and horrors arise, including an outrageously over-arrogant new teacher and a spirit that haunts the Midnight Tower. But when then the real trouble begins - someone is attacking the St. Hilde students and ripping their souls. Could it be Yuri Eberwein, a more poisonous rival than ever? Could it possibly be Schach, whose mysterious past is finally told? Or could it be the one everyone at St. Hilde most suspects...the White Devil, Nanoha Takamachi!

Nanoha and the Scarlet Beast - COMPLETE

For twelve long years, the orbital prion of Gefängnis held an infamous prisoner known only as Red-Paw. Convicted of killing twenty-three people with a single spell, she was said to be the heir apparent to the Dark Queen, Stern the Destructor.

Now she has escaped, leaving only two clues as to to where she might be headed. Nanoha Takamachi's defeat of the Queen of Darkness was Red-Paw's downfall as well. And the Gefängnis guards heard Red-Paw muttering in her sleep, "She's at St. Hilde...She's at St. Hilde..."

Nanoha Takamachi isn't safe, even within the wall of her magical school, surrounded by her friends. Because on top of it all, there may well be a traitor in their midst.

Nanoha and the Grand Magic Games - COMPLETE

Nanoha Takamachi is midway through her training as a mage and her coming of age. Nanoha want to get away from the pernicious Henkens and go to the Inter-dimensional Riot Force Cup with Fate, Hayate, and the Yagamis. She wants to dream about her crush (and maybe do more than dream). She wants to find out about the mysterious event that's supposed to take place at St. Hilde this year, an event involving seven other rival schools of magic, and a competition that hasn't happened for hundred of years. She wants to be a normal, fourteen-year-old mage. But unfortunately for Nanoha Takamachi, she's not normal - even by magical standards.

And in her case, different can be deadly.

Nanoha and the Fairy Tail

There is a door at the end of a silent hallway. And it is haunting Nanoha Takamachi's dreams. Why else would she be waking the middle of the night, screaming in terror.

There are many things on Nanoha's mind: a Tactical Combat Instructor with a personality like poison, a venomous disgruntled slave, her feelings for her best friend, the looming terror of the end-of-term Standard Testing Aptitude Results, and of course, deciding which side she in on in the coming war. This year, Nanoha is faced with the unreliability of the very government of the magical world and the confusion of wondering who the real villain is.

Despite this (or perhaps because of it), she finds depth and strength in her friends, beyond what even she knew; boundless loyalty; and unbearable sacrifice.


White Devil Universe (Dimension-6457)

The White Devil Universe is a world that parallels the original Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha with some major changes. Inspired by the Arkham Origins game, I crafted a world where Nanoha Takamachi chose to use her powers to become a preteen superhero and protect Uminari City from villains such as the crafty crime lord Leviathan, the deadly Grim Reaper, and her enigmatic Bleed.

The world can be a cruel and unforgiving place, as Nanoha will soon learn, and not everyone will have a happy ending, but with her friends by her side, you can be sure that the White Devil will (Magical! Lyrical!) do her best!

Following the Nexus Event, several dimensions were merged with the White Devil universe, including the Star Universe. For more details, see Saint Hilde Academy

Saint Hilde Academy

Summery coming soon.

Character Profiles (Heroes)

White Devil/Nanoha Takamachi: Youngest of three siblings and 4th grade student, Nanoha's life was flipped upside-down when she encountered a wounded ferret in the forest. To her surprise, the ferret is a mage named Yuuno Scrya and discovered she is a rare few on Earth that can use magic. Nanoha chooses to use her powers to help the good people of Uminari City and fight crime as the White Devil.

Though she has officially been Uminari's protector for a year, villains still tend to underestimate her because of her age, which she often takes advantage of. She is always shooting witty banter and puns when fighting, but truthfully this is a defense mechanism to hide her nervousness. Nanoha takes each day in stride and works to become not just a better hero, but a better person.

Grim Reaper/Fate Testarossa: A mercenary for hire, Fate Testarossa is feared across the galaxy as the Grim Reaper. Though only a child, Fate earned her way to infamy as one of the greatest killers in history, pulling off seemingly impossible jobs including the assassination of three TSAB admirals. As the Grim Reaper, her only motivation is money and will accept even the most unsavory jobs to get it. Rumor has it that she intends to use the money to save someone close to her.

After a failed attempt to assassinate the White Devil, Fate has made a base for herself in Uminari City and works part-time at Midori-ya. She is close friends with Nanoha (who shows signs of attraction towards Fate), but both remain unaware of each other's alter egos. She has a rather shy personality without her hood and becomes easily embarrassed, which Nanoha tends to exploit because she thinks it's cute.

Hayate Yagami/Sky Knight: Hayate is the younger sister of police Lt. Signum Yagami, and the fourth smartest person in Japan. Her intellectual levels reach university levels in the fields of computer and mechanical sciences, which is why she has never attended school. Hayate is always breaking into police databanks to keep track of Uminari's crime rate and often making breaks in cases that no one else can find. Signum, however, worries that Hayate may be becoming anti-social and tries to make her spend time away from the computer.

Hayate is obsessed with the White Devil and is one of the few people who think of her as a hero. She has come very close to finding out the White Devil's identity on several accounts, but has thus far been cut off by Lindy's interference. Under the codename Sky Knight, Hayate secretly tries to aid the White Devil with technical assistance without her sister knowing. Hayate seems to have a secret regarding the White Devil that involves the incident that cost her legs.

Lt. Signum Yagami: Signum is the newest member of the Uminari Police Force and has earned a reputation as one of the few honest cops in the city. She does not accept bribery, blackmail, or violent threats, which has made her the source of major annoyance to the Leviathan. She is very well-known for her aggressive style of bringing down the law, not afraid to use physical force to beat down criminals or interrogate them. But despite her demeanor, Signum makes it a rule to never kill anyone no matter how much they deserve it.

Signum is always looking out for her sister's safety, fearing that Hayate's outspoken nature will get her into trouble. She is particularly close to the Chief of Police, who is also one of the few good cops, and holds a small attraction to the local doctor, Shamal Suzuki. While she thinks that the White Devil is trying to do a good thing, she does not approve of her working outside the law and thinks even less of her since she is a child.

Alisa Bannings and Suzuka Tsukimura: Nanoha's best friends and schoolmates. Both come from very wealthy families – the Tsukimuras being enterprising engineers and the Bannings running a successful computer company. Mizuiro Kaiju (The Leviathan) sought to buy out the Bannings' company, but was firmly reject because of his questionable business practices. A few days later, Alisa's parents were killed in a mysterious office fire, leaving the company open for Mizuiro to acquire. Alisa is well aware that Mizuiro is behind her parent's death, but the police are unable to find evidence against him, leading her reach out to the White Devil to bring the Leviathan to justice.

Shamal Maserati: A local doctor that recently moved to Uminari City with her cousin Vita. She has been Nanoha's doctor for several months and is one of the few to know her secret identity as the White Devil. She is particularly close to Lt. Signum, even hinting to be in a romantic sense.

Vita Maserati: A third grader that lives with her cousin and legal guardian Shamal. Despite only living in Uminari for a year, Vita is worshiped at Nanoha’s school for both her cute appearance and brazen attitude. For reasons unknown, Vita holds great distaste for Nanoha and often bullies her at a given opportunity.

Vivio Sagebrecht and Einhart Startos: A pair of foreign transfer students that have come to Uminari City only recently. They tend to isolate themselves from the rest of the school and hardly ever leave their home, but Vivio enjoys speaking with Nanoha given the chance.

White Devil Beyond: A mysterious mage who claims to hail from the future and was a student of Nanoha Takamachi. It remains unknown if the White Devil Beyond is telling the truth or is part of an elaborate plot. She is apparently a master of “Hegemon-Style Kaiser Arts” and knows the secret concerning Bleed’s origins.

Red Heat: An unknown mage who practices fire magic. She seems to hold a personal grudge against the Leviathan, constantly destroying his operations and brutalizing anyone that works for him.

Blue Frost: A mage who practices ice magic. She is a high ranking member of the Sisterhood of Grimm, making her an enemy of the White Devil, but is an occasional ally when the time is needed.

Yuuno Scrya: A former archeologist turned ferret, Yuuno acts as a source of great knowledge to aid Nanoha in her quest for justice and a mentor to teach her how to use her full magical capabilities. Yuuno wouldn't be considered a sidekick due to his current condition, but he is not afraid to help Nanoha in a fight when she needs it most.

Lindy Harlaown: Admiral of the TSAB Dimensional Navy and confidant to Nanoha. Though it is her mission to bring Nanoha in to stand trial for using magic on a Non-Administrated World, Lindy supports Nanoha's crusade against injustice and often assist her behind her superior's backs. Lindy makes regular excuses for why she has been unable to capture Nanoha, but she suspect that the TSAB may soon send someone else to do the job, someone who won't be afraid to hurt Nanoha.

Komodo: Not much is known about who or what Komodo is and every attempt thus far to learn has been interrupted. There are theories that Komodo is a mutant, an Inhuman, an experiment gone wrong, a totem vessel, and the child of Godzilla. Whatever the case is, Komodo is not as menacing as her outward appearance leads many to believe. Komodo is a protector of unfortunate people, finding those who are abandoned on the street and taking them back to the Sanctuary. Komodo is good friends with the White Devil and Signum, both of whom occasionally bring donations to her people.


Character Profiles (Villains)

Added upon appearance*

Mizuiro Kaiju/Leviathan: His true name is unknown, but he took the name Mizuiro Kaiju when he arrived on Earth ten years prior to the series. Mizuiro was a shrewd businessman who ran a number of underground dealings on Mid-Childa, taking up the moniker of the Leviathan after the sea beast of his hometown. But one day, Mizuiro made a careless mistake and nearly got himself caught by TSAB admiral Gil Graham. Mizuiro managed to escape the planet and relocated himself to an Non-Administrated Planet called Earth, where he immediately restarted his business by selling Mid-Childen technology. His business had prospered for nine years until the appearance of the White Devil, who not only interrupted several of his major deals, but also brought the attention of the TSAB to Earth.

Mizuiro is a mage like Nanoha, but is not on the same skill level as her. He specializes in celestial magic, which, coincidentally, is the same type of magic that Nanoha practices. Mizuiro is also known to have been a gifted flying back in his early days before an injury sustained against Gil Graham grounded him. Due to the similarities in their magic, Lindy has theorized that Mizuiro's arrival on Earth may have coincided with Nanoha's birth. As of yet, this is still unconfirmed.

Gabriel Ciel/Tailwind: A brilliant man of French descent that had a promising career in the field of aerospace engineering, but after an accident with a prototype engine he invented caused the deaths of a dozen co-workers, Gabriel was fired and news of the accident prevented him from finding stable work. He started using his knowledge of aerodynamics and engineering to become a master thief that specialized in high-rise robberies, discovering that he had a natural talent for it.

When he was hired for several jobs in Japan, his employer supplied him with a specialized suit made from an unknown material and aerial tech that makes him a better flier than even the White Devil. Closer inspection of the suit shows that the material is closely related to Mid-Childan tech, but the TSAB presently has no knowledge of any existing technology that matches it. The White Devil Beyond claims that it is technology is from the future and thus hasn't been invented yet.

Unlike most villains, Tailwind did not name himself, but was named by the White Devil.

Sota Jishin/Seismic: A common street criminal that was born and raised in Uminari City like Nanoha, but with an opposite purpose in life. Sota was once a member of a tough street gang known as the Dragon Heads until the Leviathan arrived in Uminari ten years ago and effortlessly crushed the gang in order to establish his reputation. Sota was quick to accept a working job from the Leviathan, but the Leviathan quickly became imaptient with Sota's hot head and loud mouth and quickly fired him.

He was recently given a pair of Mid-Childan tech gloves that can manipulate vibrations by the same man that provided Tailwind with his flight suit. Seismic uses his vibro-gloves to build a fearsome reputation rather than for personal profit, which makes him a joke to others in the White Devil's Rogue Gallery.

Seismic lost his hearing after a disastrous fight against the White Devil and Signum Yagami and holds a personal grudge against them both

Gregory Gordon/Blitzkrieg: A former squad captain in the German military, regarded as one of the best in the country, until he was dishonorably discharged for abuse of authority and blackmail. Forced to flee from his country in shame, the Leviathan hired him for his military expertise as one of his top enforcers. When the White Devil emerged, Gordon suffered a constant sting of defeats which earned him a reputation as the White Devil's punching bag.

Gordon was given a suit made by the TSAB Research and Development by the Leviathan, which increases her reflexes above superhuman levels and discharges strong electric shocks. Though called Blitzkrieg, the White Devil constantly calls him Sparkler; a fad that catches on to other heroes and villains.

Gordon is the White Devil's longest rival, sometimes considered her arch-enemy.

Scorch/Unknown: A pyromaniac cultist that was born and raised in Silent Hill, Maine during the time when the town and it's people mysteriously vanished into an impenetrable fog. It is unknown how Scorch managed to escape Silent Hill, but when she came out, she proclaimed herself to be a messenger of God sent to cleanse the world of sin in fire. She is solely responsible for hundred of burnings spanning from North America to Asia, finally coming to a stop in Japan where she was confronted by the White Devil, whom she sees as the agent of the real Devil.

Scorch incorporates the use of many flame-based weaponry including knives, flamethrowers, and incendiary grenades. At one point she wielded what she believed to be a sacred sword called Laevatein until it was confiscated by Signum, never knowing it was actually an Armed Device from the Belkan Era.

(Scorch is the re-imaged version of Pyrexia from the White Devil prototype story).


Black Rock Shooter: Nexus

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Nexus reviews
It is believed that there are an infinite number of parallel worlds: some similar with only one or two distinctions, some so radically different they defy logic. But in every universe, there is one constant that holds them together. This is their story.
Black★Rock Shooter - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 44,056 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 3/17/2016 - Published: 1/6/2016 - Mato K., Black Rock Shooter, Insane Black Rock Shooter, White☆Rock Shooter
The White Devil reviews
AU. Nanoha Takamachi was once just an innocent girl until she discovered she had a magical power unlike any other. Now as the White Devil, she will use her gifts to protect the good people of Uminari City and fight back against those who would harm it. Magical! Lyrical! She'll do her best!
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 74,765 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 64 - Follows: 71 - Updated: 11/13/2015 - Published: 4/27/2015 - Nanoha T., Fate T., Hayate Y.