Misty night unending
Idle, gripped by fear
Never to accept a greater
Motion in the stars
Embrace, now, bright new morrows
In horizons unforeseen
'Side arriving truth

Shadows fade at dawn's advent
O'er the mountainous terrain
Crisp with pine, the air draws down
Kindness manifesting true

Pretense stripped away
Up the ladder evergreen
Prompt in its unveiling
Pray, my love, as we
Embark on a journey
Toward freedom everlasting!

The name is Elly. I'm just your average reader and reviewer. And occasional writer.

You are welcome to disagree with my opinions on your stories; furthermore, you are under no obligation to even take my advice (believe it or not, we reviewers aren't always right!). However, if you are seeking to improve, you won't do so by shutting out every word that isn't glowing praise.

Just a thought. :)