can you update this pls its good

This is super good! I usually hate it when people write stories on the games, but yours in the best one I've found. You don't just write the cutscene, you write everything and more. Your OC isn't just the avatar, he's a cool and funny guy. I really enjoy this and hope you finish it and make a sequel.

Please continue this

Great story can't wait for the next chapter.

It would've been hilarious if after the makeover, Johnny and Annie would have a bit similar to Logan and Yukio from the Wolverine where Annie stated that Johnny looks nice as a girl and he would respond with "I feel violated."

OK. So I just powered through your whole story over the last few hours and, HOLY. SHIT! You portray The New Kid the exact same way I do. Also I really love the way you write the fight scenes. They are brutal and I love it! I was literally shaking with excitement reading the fights between Johnny and Stan and Johnny and Kyle. I can't wait to see if you continue this story. Good luck! (Your gonna need it for the next chapter.)

Do you plan on having the characters explain to Johnny about how this game came to be? It would be interesting to read his thoughts on the whole PS4 vs XBOX ONE war between 2 factions.

NAZI ABORTED BABIES TIME WOOOOOOOOOO

I was wondering how you were gonna cover this. Well done.

Awesome man I had forgotten this story and how much I love your character’s point of view. I can’t wait to see more.

I already asked you if you were going to ever do a sequel to this back from my review on Chapter 1.
Yes, do it!

DON'T KICK THE BABY!

This is sooooo damn immature and I love it.

Since you're still updating this, will you do Fractured But Whole at some point as well?
This is a great start.

I have an idea have bebe go to Canada with johney they could form a nice dynamic :)