Hey, this is a good story. Just wandering if there will be any updates or not? Would love to read more. Its December 27, 2018 now.

Oh my gawd. This makes my heart weep that it hasn't been updated in 2 years.

I like where you're going - I think. I suspect the collection of characters will be somewhat more volatile.

A very interesting story. I'm waiting to hear how you plan to continue.

This is just gaggingly bad, and that is the kindest thing I can say about it.

im glad this story got updated i cant wait to see what you do with it

Premise is still good but, again, you rushed it! You skipped several important scenes & conversations, so now it's just a jumble of quick, disconnected, scenes that make little to no sense! You also have pretty much all of the mass effect characters acting OOC, especially the Council & also a slew of spelling errors... (see my pervious review for more details).

I don't mean for this to be a rant, this story has a lot of potential! The plot is very intriguing &, if you fill out their background (maybe with flashbacks?), the characters could be too. Like I said, this has potential, but you need to put he effort in to work on it! You have the premise, the outline of the plot; now you just have to flesh it out & fill in the details...

Great chapter Update soon

very good new chapter

it's are not and in "you are Harry' s wife" not "you and Harry's wife" your idea is pretty interesting but your chapters are slowly starting to lean towards rushed and somewhat on the crackish side, Also state how long it is between Harry going tot he battleship to help unlock the bridge and him getting called to pilot the puddle jumper/gateship, oh and btw it should be "Well why don't I" not "Well why I don't"

is it so hard to put the O in follow/followed? also it's weird not wired lol

Things are going to be interesting with so many different crosses and abilities from each being brought into the mix.

The chapter needs some spell checking to correct some odd errors, otherwise it wasn't a bad installment.

excellent update

Interesting story. Looking forward to reading more.