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Debbie Hicks chapter 31 . 6/10/2018
32. Chapter 32. theen all of alien Rattlesnakes Drain ed us/them with here FIRE Stripped to a pole blaring then fire declared as Weapons as aaaall of them had Planetatry ablities ten All of the sudden a Army uprising aalien s/Vulcans joined our arm y then suddenly Foun d us/aaall guilty of mutrder of as all Inferno tkidnapped then Foun d sen tenced to death MURDERED Us with implanted kids were hurtig us ribs broken skin/bon esa thre broken you deie n ow scream s Hair shaven theen EXECUTED! Then Take n a life Alien ones were Fighters then M urdered as all most more drain ed of b lod for our youn g/youthy were hurting m ore Humanitylost m ake them Phoenix covern guards memb ers then The b irth thern bittern then frely violently diedf herre with the kids followed broken as all both side then Ven om stan ded from here then Five pices flung freeely then Were sick very sickerst then suddenly blacking out were Deceaded then were Paloer then too late as Phoenix coven m em bers were Undead then Broken had dead hearts from the v enom good m ake them train but reeducate are Brainwashed are Weaponsmy Sailor Soldiers/Kn ights you can 't die weork for us wee thre then too late wiped out despressed ten who createrd you tell our m aster ten were forced to work then suddenly Extin ct n owe Ten CAaen turies later was n ot well then was far too skinny but suddenly Gain ed well-tioned m uscles were thre times of n west superstren gth then were pawns weere with BAaorg white skin an d Darker Falkor's red eyes then Blacking out had an mesia were unable to breed then awere boundb lew apart then were deathly hungry hun gted for brains of as all then too late my arm y killed as all chain ed screaming then MURDERED! b roken b ones tore clothes blood asa all of it dying the Change was truer but treal the Cullen s found us/thdem with firery ven then took from here found with te Both ten Slicerd ripped from here then IM PALED Tore from us/them then the head discovered Alice she's turning into our race with therm the guard they wre Destroyed you die with them scream s without memories Atom ized puplish flames but was no longer alive then the head heard my dying heart stop so theirs then Became ivy stone hardest cold a changing heart for us/them aBlazing freely then were as all of it then too late most then suddenlyopened now Falkor's rose eyes felt a Infernoin my throat then so Bella with them were far paler were sparkling into Diamonds was fa too late was undead but Immortal but healed was flawlesasn ever had Air anymore then first hunt combin erd thre as all of most animals but too late then ATOM IZED Were most as all of the Supernatural bein s/Aliens/Vulcans's as all brought here then ten Tore from here then had a power so hers with therm thenm y gift was Vulcan Funeral Dirge was Falo's Journey in Vulcan blew apart then Extin ct from here brought herre wee report they are roug killed both good we sen tced the as all of them to death good then suddenly Atom izerd forever as most as all of them more mazillion s or more rem ain s as all of from around the world with imm ortal children killed as all of packs of Lycans as they called them then weere extin ct then too late with our own destroyed most as all of guaerds as all both low/high bitten created a lot of witnessesa then exploded of a retrovenomvirus they created as most more last both nuked Destroyed young/youth with both report with five reported us to them of a new birth Shiftpires they were pleadiong of our kids were special one oof the kin ddifferent alien but extraterrestrial but telepathic kids Alice had a vision they arer all comin g all of them blackin g out chain ed you broke the law the mothers broker our crime then EXECUTION Then tore from banished from bodies things five or more from then Extinct from here then were Wiped out then brought here We briong you them b roke the law of hunting they are sentenced to die here then five you lied kill them then screams of all ten ten Murdered for m ore guards as a result Alice they are the ones did this deed then blew from the ground snapped first death as all immigrated then brought here now reawaken undead fully completely time no longer humans anymore then too late urgh my head going to spin worlds ten us with them had preivous lives were immortal wearing newest clothes was a Starfleet uniform but with boots with heels Alice they were killed n o thasnk you OW! She with us were too strong Alice they converted they never change but they stopped living or dying they are deceased then too late blew freely but lost need to breed then the next generation were stronger with us/them were Athletic but fit well-toned but were telepathic by touch were Syrannites of Surak had Teenaged Ocampan ears were pointed upswept eyebrows cold Brown/black eyes hair grew back with bangs Embraced Kolinahr were n ot humans born Vulcans burst freely were unable to die were now a offshoot race followed his teachings of Surak blazing freely then with both followed ten tore as all him an s from here brought here that no longer alive onto Vulcan things were nationals of the planet Vulcan bound to him forever now were as all of them but too late dressed in Robes of a priestess so they were not normal had powers four were drained but blew apart forbidden brought here we report they are dead wiped out good now go then lost Earth to them suddenly 2018/2382 oh my god they did this act you are no longer alive but they took over used bodies as all of them cloned but nuked.
wolf-girl-only-in-my-dreams chapter 30 . 7/30/2016
Loved this. Wish you would have put up the sequel.
wildanimal1 chapter 20 . 6/6/2015
I need to point something out to you. In a earlier chapter you said that Quil was imprinted to Claire. Then in this chapter you said that Quil imprinted on this Tessa girl. I just needed to point this out. Thanks for reading my review.
DOPennington chapter 26 . 3/17/2015
This is great! Please update soon!
brankel1 chapter 26 . 3/15/2015
Fantastic.
belladu57 chapter 25 . 2/20/2015
Very good
shadowgirl0 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
I love your story. It has a great plot and plot twist, however, it is extremely hard to read with the typos and lack of commas. It is a great idea though.
DOPennington chapter 24 . 2/1/2015
Update soon please!
jenniferemma.js chapter 23 . 12/31/2014
Hahaha sweet Good story
Skyxcx chapter 20 . 11/19/2014
plz update soon
Wikked chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
Oh my god. I'm sure the story is great but it's anything but well written. Maybe it gets better in later chapters if so: please edit these ones. I'm sorry but I just can't read this.
Guest chapter 20 . 11/11/2014
Love it update soon
Guest chapter 18 . 10/9/2014
I love it can't wait for more love this book it's amazing!
AlanaLubberts chapter 8 . 6/22/2014
I like it! Is cassie going to be a wolf because of her dad or not? Please write soon I can't wait to read more
RealHuntress18 chapter 2 . 5/14/2014
I tried to forgive he misspelling and grammar. It was suffocating me. Please let me fix this!