I was so suprised you've updated this fic! That's one of my favourites AU's and BMT fics, love the scenery! Keep up with the great work, I keep looking for updates every day

I enjoyed this. However savara is a traitor and doesn’t serve the sachaka king.

WOW- I am both glad and also sad that I found your story as it seems it was abandoned.
I love your writing style and your story is progressing so natural and in-character for them both, it was a pure joy to read.
The way how their ritual slowly changed while they both separately realized they had feelings for each other with both of them not admitting them laud gave me chills.
Also, to have Soneas feelings forced out in the open by an Inchani and how you depicted Soneas emotions afterwards simply perfect.
I hope you will return to this Story on day in the meantime, all the best!

Thumbs up!

oh my God I love this one! sweetest! thank you!

Hi,

I absolutely adore you story, although it has been published some time ago, I just discovered it and am really fascinated. Your writing style is very good, you make very few mistakes which makes reading all the more enjoyable. Above all though, I like the way the story is progressing and the way the characters are portrayed, which is very in-character and believable. I would be thrilled if you have not given up on this yet and would update this again!

All the best!

You sure do know how to use your words!

Please update, I really like your story!

Please please please update. You had great ideas and i'm really curious what happened next!

Hey, what next? You stoped in the most interesting moment :) and I really like brain-read scene with Ichani as way that they know about their feelings

I Love it love it love it! So sweet, so tender. Is there more to come? Will you write something about them telling the Guild everything? Please tell me you will because I enjoy your story and wrting style far too much as that it can end here! So please continue!

Okay..n now I'm really curious for the jext chapter :D like: Let them be together already and don't you dare letting one of them die! But I love it. I think you met Soneas character really well, with her not denying it. With Akkarin I'm not sure as i find it hard to define his character, But I like your Akkarin very much.

I really love it. The part with the wine when she's drunk is kind of funny. Of course remindng one of the scene n the book with the alcoholic dessert :D and I like now you keep the looks Akkarin gives her the same as write n the book just in another setting. Or now you generally put the things that happened in Sachaka in this setting. And I really like the embrace after giving power ritual. so sweet and romantic. And now they become closer so naturaly is really nice too. The scene where they're sitting on the couch *_* Love it! I also really like just your writing style, not only your ideas. So as you can see I really love your story. So please don't stop and a big please! Now Akkarin death please!

Hihi *_* so cute and romantic. Love it!

Uh I love it so far. Nice to know that this story exists in english and goes further than the german one :D I'm looking forward to the rest