Reviews for i could write it better than you ever felt it |
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inuyashamunkey chapter 5 . 2/28/2017 OH NO |
Thank you chapter 5 . 6/28/2016 The plot is really interesting. I was a little confused at first, but it mostly makes sense now ( I only don't understand about Annie.) Thanks! :) |
PremierGoldPineapple chapter 5 . 10/3/2015 What's going on? I feel like Eren in the new world, as a metaphore. Annie? Jean? What? And where's the book? If someone found it, and is using it to make more characters, they could potentially introduce titans into this world! |
Almondcrunch chapter 1 . 7/21/2015 The whole story shouts "Ruby Sparks" to me which I'd highly recommend watching. I can't wait for the other characters to come to life. Will Erwin appear in this story? |
DarkSapphireXx chapter 5 . 6/10/2015 Oh my, something's going on! I don't have very compact theories of what might be happening so I'm really looking forward to figuring it out (with Levi). And also looking forward to eren and levi getting closer ;) Poor romantically oblivious Eren will most likely need a rival like Jean to prod him along I think...hm now that I think about it, I can definitely see some potential paranoid jealousy. This Jean is a lot more reliant and knows and understands Levi's and Hange's world, and Levi DID inadvertently say long-faced people are attractive in his world hehehehe XD It's a lovely story so far, the only thing I have issue with is that Hange has no gender! I know in the manga, it's up to the reader but it's a bit awkward to read 'they' all the time tbh. I've also basically accepted she's a woman now because of the anime. But well, it's up to you of course! |
xxxPureRosexxx chapter 5 . 6/6/2015 Wow things are getting exciting! I'm glad you are continuing because this is a great story! And it has developed a lot and I can't wait to see where this will go! Keep up the great work! |
crestfallenangels911 chapter 1 . 6/3/2015 I am absolutely in love with this beautiful story |
Not so human anymore chapter 5 . 6/2/2015 Plot plot plot |
cieltakumi chapter 5 . 6/1/2015 This story is so interesting! I’m really enjoying it. Can’t wait for the next update! |
amidstidris chapter 4 . 5/16/2015 This is certainly interesting. I wonder how you're going to develop the romance between short stack and clueless with Mikasa and Armin around. Looking forward to your next update! |
Isalyn chapter 4 . 1/25/2015 Love love love! What a fun twist on modern AU crossovers! Can't wait for more! |
moonshroom420 chapter 4 . 11/4/2014 sah perfect I forgot to breathe a lot of the time |
moonshroom420 chapter 3 . 11/4/2014 I love Hange I really really do |
moonshroom420 chapter 2 . 11/4/2014 HAHAHAHAHAHHAAH |
moonshroom420 chapter 1 . 11/4/2014 THIS IS SO FREAKIN COOL |