I love this! I read the whole thing in one night and I must say, it's amazing! Thank you for the great story I enjoyed every second

This by far my favorite clap back from an author. I also loved your story

Don't worry, Loki, we both hate Jane Foster with a passion ;)

You go girl. No one's forcing them to read. Can't stand people who leave such useless and offensive comments. Loved your story by the way. Dunno where people got the Mary Sue idea since Sorrow seemed very well-rounded to me. The different age references kinda threw me over (still don't know whether she's 30 or over 600) but that's such a small thing. Critiquing stories and throwing cusses is easy! Making a plotline and characters to follow it through then completing your own story on the other hand? Shows what level you're on compared to them.

I know it's been a really long time since you posted this story but I just read the A/N at the bottom of chapter 29 and I just want to commend you for deciding not to take the negative words to heart. I'm not sure if you're still writing fics or writing your own books by now. You're a really good writer. There's understandable grammar and spelling, a good plot-line and original content, and so much character development. But no matter what I say or others say, in the end you're writing because this is your hobby and something you enjoy. It doesn't matter if this story was terrible or not. Just write to write cuz you like it.

I love Lala Land! That movie was great. The ending killed me though. Like, who the bloody hell is David?!

What a beautiful story, I read it out in one night and it didn't stop captivating me. Great story but even greater is the author

I read it all in a day... Such an amazing story

Now starting out... excited

I love this story. I couldn't put it down!

I think the reason you can't write this as a romance is because Loki seems more of a father to her than a lover, but then again, that's just me...

Hahaha! I loved this story so much. Your sense of humor is amazing and I couldn't fault your incredible descriptive writing. I hope you've had a wonderful five years since writing this in 2014. Thankyou!

AHHHHHHHHH! My HEART :3

Please excuse me while I cry of happiness ️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️

This book was amazing I was so addicted to it and I legit stayed in bed all day reading it. It was so engaging and such a cliff hanger. I totally recommend this book it was a total “thriller” in its own way! PLEASE READ!