Reviews for How Life Took a Right Turn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know it has been ages since you last updated this story so I'm not sure if you're even still around. I'd love to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is pretty good. Excellent writing and great personality with your characters |
![]() ![]() ![]() please finish |
![]() ![]() Love it alot |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool! Cool! I like your imagination! Did Marko really have a girlfriend, or did you make that part. Sorry, I no remember very well:( |
![]() ![]() Totally want more story, please keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey sorry only seeing this had updated now, really cool chapter! I honestly have no criticisms for this story, it's funny and well-written and I think it rocks! If I had any advice I would give it but honestly you're doing a great job, keep it up! :) |
![]() ![]() Sometimes you skim over things fast and sometimes you go in depth, it would help if you tried to even out your descriptions |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I freaking love this it's so funny, even hearing the boys talk to themselves in their heads, I just got a mental image of Dwayne looking all stoic and impassive and the line "David can be dumber than a box of rocks" going through his head hahaha it's so funny :) You have a great sense of mystery surrounding it too, at first I thought it was just these girls in a band and then the mystery P.O.V really had me like "O.O what?" Lol it's very well written and hilarious, I am definitely favouriting this and I am so looking forward to the girls all meeting the guys, it will be so much fun :D update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the more I read the more im in love XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, this is an epic storyline c: cant wait for an update! |