Heh, I like how Mikey hasn't told anyone what he's been up to. Nice story.

Do the others ever find out about his girlfriend? How do the react? Is there going to be a sequel?

Only Mikey... cake and whipped cream and tag as foreplay, and then cake after.

I think... I have read too much. Good story, tho!

You are not going to know how much I just love this story! I just can't put it into words. It's no wonder you were placed in the fanfic competition as this piece of writing is just effortless and you capture Mikey so well throughout. He is so sweet but also has that devilishly wicked side which I love. Abbey is so well paired with him and you know what... I really like the way that he is her secret lover and that his brothers don't know about her. I read this story practically every time I arrive on this site. Love it!

Lol

Moi moi bien

Eeeeeeeee xD

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Lol tempted by peanut butter cookies
That really was the best line i have seen all day

Eeeee xD

Oh god. I love baking.

I loved this! I was just thinking, I think it would be great to continue this story and he would introduce Abigaile to the rest of the family. But it's up to you.

aw please do more its cute love the storyline so far :)

A www it's over :(. I want more

Awesome story. Very descriptive and was a delight to read . Mikey was so adorable and yet..."awesome". Also, you were great with descriptions and your use of adjectives was hardly ever redundant. Good job!

Wow, I hope this author decides to continue...even if just another creative hot scene...something...my god, this was really well done! I am so impressed with you keeping Mikey's character absolutely true..and the short scenes with his brothers were spot on too, outstanding work, THANK YOU FOR SHARING!