Reviews for Bus Bench, Take Two
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
Loved this! This is realistic writing and a happy ending all in one!

You should write more Swarkles. You write them so in-character.
Al Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
Very nice story! So perfect!
idiotpurple chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Owwwwn! You wrote B/R super well and in character, don't worry! I know I said that a lot in your fanfics vut dammit it's true: I love it!
"Hey, baby... Hey, actual baby" HAHAHA
"Double-entendre five" hihihi.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
You know what you should do?

Write more B/R
alleemaria chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
Yes! I love this. They so shouldn't have divorced!
This is so sweet, I love the way Barney reflets on his wedding... It's very réaliste and so sweet. Well done! :D
tentsubasa chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
I really liked it except for the part where Barney refuted what Robin said about the things she needed to work on, saying that all the blame was his. What she said was legitimate. While Barney was taking out his lack of center and purpose out on Robin, I'm highly skeptical that she didn't contribute to their almost divorce. They both have things to work on individually and together to make it work.

I love, love, loved that Tracy Barney interaction, though. It was perfect. :D I LOVED the way Tracy was able to set Barney straight in the actual series. This hit that vibe perfectly. :D
draco122 chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
very nice
Draco122
dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
A good one
Deleted Account 91 chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Love this chapter
LBx
Kaizer-Kid chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Groan, why does Barney always get blamed for this divorce? I doubt that Tracy would pin the blame on Barney alone in this situation, remember it takes two to tango and Robin is pretty freaking insecure and manipulative...
Osced chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Interesting, the show didn't expand that much about their problems, but this could easily be a scene from the show. But in some way it felt like away to disregard the divorce scene in the series finale.

/Osced
LeilaTheGalaxyDefender chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
I love this, very enjoyable to read. Barney and Tracy's (platonic) relationship is adorable!
DrgnMage25 chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Great story! Although I'd like to read the next chapter where Barney actually meets Robin at the airport.
Nckmillr chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
I love the fact that you delved into Barney's friendship with Tracy. I always thought she would be the one he would talk to about the harder stuff, and you wrote it perfectly.
CanonWorshipper4evah chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
So I don't tend to review much, but I figured I should. I have to say, your grasp on these characters is brilliant and probably even better than the show. (Though that's not hard, given the finale.) I can definitely see this happening, because there's no way Tracy would just let things fall apart like that. Also, you write the best T/T I've ever read, so there's that.
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