Tucker is sneaky XD He got 'three phone numbers and a pity date'... Hilarious, the 'fake tears' are killing me XD

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOO this is soooo funny!

Well for once stuck got a girl or three, still I'm sure that won't last long.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Cute and funny little story. I was literally on the floor laughing. Great story!

Haha, I love those last few lines there. The total unexpected surprise of it made me laugh.

I think you've got a good idea going on here, and I'm so excited to see that you're creating more stories for the Phandom and uploading all the time. That's great! Way to keep the Danny Phantom archive alive.

I like that this story leads mostly with dialogue, but you may want to consider inserting more sensory detail to flesh out and provide structure to your story. That will make your story not necessarily that much longer, but it will develop it into something a reader can really sink teeth into.

Either way, keep up the good work!