Reviews for SOTD Sage of the Dead
Guest chapter 13 . 8/2
Personally I think the ending of your Chapter 12 disclaimer would be more like the kind of attitude a war veteran Naruto would have.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/2
This story has a lot of potential but it has a few flaws.

For starters, Naruto's armed to the teeth yet all he uses is his sword and his Ninjutsu. This is an overused cliche that doesn't make any sense, for starters, contrary to popular beliefs, a sword is not always best for melee combat and a short blade, like a kunai isn't best for dealing with swarms of the undead, and this is coming from someone who is TRAINED to use these weapons. A sword is a somewhat distant weapon, if a target gets too close to you, you can't use the sword, because of the longer blade, this is what they mean by 'getting in your guard', so if Naruto is swarmed, and those things get too close, it's game over. The opposite applies with a kunai, he'll need to get dangerously close to use it and when you got zombies coming at you, back to back to back, you're going to get overwhelmed. This is why guns are the better weapon, you can use a gun long range or short range so long as it doesn't have a hard recoil, this is why movies that make fun of 9mm are BS, a 9mm is the best weapon to have because 9mm pistols have the highest capacity, even smaller caliber pistols do not have the same round capacity as a Beretta, Glock, or SIG, the reason being smaller caliber pistols are smaller in size whereas a 9 is about the same size pistol as a .45, but the bullets are smaller, meaning you can put more in a magazine, a Beretta or Glock are usually twelve to fifteen rounds on average. You can wield both guns short range and long range, for an idea of what I'm talking about, watch the Resident Evil: Vendetta CGI film, watch the gunfight scene with Leon Kennedy towards the end, that is a very possible way to properly wield a gun for both long range and short range targets, the latter would be difficult with a high caliber gun because the recoil makes it difficult if not impossible to use one-handed, however a 9mm can be wielded one handed, a Colt M1911, can also probably be wielded one handed, I know I can fire one with only one hand. Swords and Knives are impractical when dealing with large numbers of enemies, pistols are always best, that's why no one uses knives and swords in combat anymore. It also takes a lot of power to wield a knife or sword the way it's done in a zombie apocalypse, in real life against a living person, the slightest wound can prove fatal, but zombies, if not shot in the head, have to be completely beheaded, and that takes a lot of strength also possibly leaving a problem with overextending a slash which in turn leaves you open for an attack.

Ninjutsu doesn't work, because most of Naruto's most powerful techniques are going to be so overpowered, he can injure his allies, for example, I've seen a lot of people use the Shinra Tensei, if he used a Shinra Tensei while fleeing towards the bus, he's going to blast EVERYONE, friend and foe, it's not a controlled technique. Naruto's only controlled technique is Rasengan, but as we've seen in the manga and anime, the Rasengan isn't something Naruto can pop up in a split second, which when you're dealing with the undead, is what you have to do, especially since each time he hits one, he's going to have to form another.

I'm not saying Naruto can't go ninja on the undead, but there's a time and place for it. While moving through Fujimi Academy, his sword is going to be better than a gun, when fleeing on the bus a fireball would have cleaned out the zombies in front of the gates, but when he's fighting a horde of undead in the street, he's going to need firearms. FYI, I know you didn't have him navigate Fujimi and you didn't do the bus to escape the undead, I was just using those as examples.

I also think with the harem, you should have had him save Misuzu and Toshimi instead of Kyoko. Kyoko's a bitter woman and a teacher, she's NOT going to have any interests in Naruto, Misuzu and Toshimi are his underclassmen, there's not only a realistic chance of affection there, it's a high possibility BECAUSE he's their upperclassman, how many Freshmen or Sophomore girls in high school AIM to date the popular Junior or Senior? Answer... ALL of them. It's more realistic.

Lastly, his personality, I get he's OOC and war torn, but being battle hardened isn't going to change your overall personality. NARUTO is a very blunt and informal person, he's not going to go from calling Tsunade 'baa-chan' and calling Sasuke a 'bastard', to talking like some eloquent samurai general, regardless of how much conflict he's seen. He's not going to go from blunt statements to poetic descriptions, a person who does stuff like blast someone away with a Rasengan while going "See ya suckers!" is not going to go to arms crossed "Leave and I shall not harm you", not just because of a war, he may go from "See ya suckers" to getting in someone's face and saying "If you don't get the Hell out of my way, I'm going to BREAK you". You're not showing a war torn Naruto, you're showing a completely altered Naruto.

If these things were fixed, you'd have a Hell of a story.
BigJtheclown chapter 13 . 7/24
please come back to this story its really good
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29
Show not tell.
Uwu chapter 1 . 4/25
Suffewing nawuto? Is this your idea of a joke. To let naruto say he killed many in a new world? Your not really logical in your approach in this story. I’ll assume every other story you have made is just as cancerous as this tumour.
Borello chapter 13 . 4/24
the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.
Darth Authorr chapter 1 . 3/2
Im just WTF? Like not to say ur bad, but u could have thought it out better, i admire your dedication to continue this story but by the first chapter I've given up trying to ignore the idiocy of this naruto. Like yes its a common interpretation, moody/depressed/etc with reasons to do so, but the way u do it, i just see a moody kid going through his teen years, so, i dont know petty
thegrison chapter 2 . 12/4/2019
Too much too fast. You took the easy way of some things. You should have took more time and filled out your story a lot more before hand.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/27/2019
Debo admitirlo el fic es bueno pero hay algo que no tiene sentido y es que use gafas para ocultar el rinnegan por si no lo sabes si se puede desactivar :v supongo que no investigaste acerca del tema pero bueno aunque el fic es algo antiguo espero que el creador tome este dato en cuenta por q no simpre va a poder andar esas gafas de sol xdxdxd :v
Angron chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
Immortal Naruto really? it's stupid! because none of the girls is immortal, it ruins the very idea of the harem lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 13 . 4/5/2019
Well that was interesting surelly getting pretty exciting now shame there hasn't been an update since last February shame this is a great story
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 4/4/2019
Well that was interesting I wonder if that girl was the reason Naruto could only sense 1 person instead of 9 in total oh well he keeps kicking ass though
YeagerMeister31 chapter 11 . 4/3/2019
Well that was another interesting chapter so Saeko has joined with Shiva I think I wonder what the others get I wonder what Ark's Cannon is exactly, Naruto is totally badass why he smokes is weird although smoking looks cool I suppose, wonder what happens next look forward to the lemon whenever that happens.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 4/2/2019
Well this was another cool chapter I wonder what happens next this is getting cool.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/30/2019
Well that was interesting kinda short but oh well thought there might have been a lemon but oh well got a one-sided fight instead Kagaro and Mira are such idiots and weak compared to Naruto.
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