Nice story.

It's nicely written, I enjoyed reading it. :o)

Totally loved the story... wish there was more of jealous Asami... /\ **Squeal** 3 3

This was a fun story to read! :) I loved it!

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing it :-)

This was good andbintake it that Akihito's boss knows that Akihito is gay but doesn't care. That's how it seemed.

Lol. Very amusing. Great story. I enjoyed reading this very much.

This was an awesome story! I love how Asami does elaborate things like pick interesting people to sit at the table for Akihito and take him to a hotel room and doesn't advertise how much thought and effort he put into it. He really goes to so much effort to try to see what Akihito likes, how he is feeling, to make sure he's safe and to think of things that will please him. All of these things show his perfectionists, attention to detail but also his love and sensitivity to Akihito.

great story. I like the twists a lot. kudos to an excellent writer who never fails to amaze readers of finder fanfics.

I love your story It was really great :p

O.O Asami letting someone else take the kill
:P but it is cute XDD Asami not doing anything

Lovely!

Fun Fact: Aki is also email buddies with Feilong. Yes, they stayed in contact. This is canon, from Finder no Rakuin, the Fei side-story that I finally managed to find in English!

this is so sweet, in the violent twisted way their relationship works.

The twist was awesome!

It is the end?or will be more chapter?