interesting will there be more?

Harry/Ash

Just re-read this very carefully (there's several things I missed/forgot from the last time) for the first time in a while and I reserve my original thought; its good but could use some work. I mean I love the idea of two universes combining (or rather the Dark-hunters in ex pulled into the Marvel/HP world) and the complications that came from that,but the execution leaves much to be desired. So I have some constructive off, the first two chapters (not the prologue, it's good) feel very rushed (the time jumps are very hard to follow and you have Apollymi about to destroy the world but nothing coming of it, as examples), so if possible expand on the early chapters (like some in between scenes with Harry working for SHIELD or being recruited by Fury, things like that).

Second, a lot of your scenes have no clear demarcation (ie a line dividing them or a transition) so they run into each other and can make for a confusing read. So clear separation of scenes is really necessary. Third, Harry has just met the Peltiers and Dark-Hunters and he's giving them his life story? It felt very forced to me. I mean I can understand explaining the magical world to them, but both the personal details about his life and what he does (like really, he just says I work for a spy agency?) was way too much to give to strangers. So I would suggest you either say WHY he trusts them so easily or move that part of the scene to later in the story.

I do have some other minor questions about the actual story (Like how Ryssa and Apollodorus are alive when they were murdered like 12,000 years ago and neither of her brothers are making a big deal out of it; why Tory hates Ash and how Dumbledore is involved at all when the gods could easily kill him) but those are minor and I think will be revealed as the story goes on.

Again please don't take these as negatives or meaning any kind of dislike. I very much enjoy the story and just want to see it get even better. Hope to see an update soon!

Great story do you plan on moving harry to the world that ash comes from?

Harry will be pissed off. Hermione and Ron had better hide.

bottom harry please with savitar and ash!

CLIFFHANGERS !WHY!

Love this story and cant wait to read more

Great story hope you update can't wait to see what happens next

Good story have you ever thought of pairing harry and Acheron/Ash?

Hope you are able to update soon, thank-you.

srry but this story doesn't really make much sense.

Please consider updating I love Harry Potter and The Dark Hunter series

Love this story and can't wait to read more

Thank you ver much for this new chapter! I love reading your story. Can't wait to read more already.