Chapter 14 is plagerism. Maybe others are. This chapter is practically an exact copy. Here’s a link. Pretty funny.

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Great ending

I love the end to this part. Your cast of characters fits how I pictured them.
Kind of fitting that Tony would leave the Army only to join the Navy.
Thinking the guy who did the job offer was Gibbs.

Looking forward to your tribute and the next adventure

Actually I thought Rebecca Romijn would have made a better Bridget. if T's working at NCIS does this mean he's going to be working with Gibbs? Or is he leading his own team? Hmmm?

Great two chapters. Keep up the great work and update soon please.

Nice save by Tony

not at all surprised Tony resigned to go after Bridget but will it actually be accepted.

Need McGee added somewhere in this story please! Perhaps he did bow to his father's wishes and joined the Navy and runs into Tony on a mission?

Great chapter with interesting developments. Looking forward to more. Keep up the great work and update soon please.

Loved finding out Bridget is related to LBJ. That was cool.
Interesting choices for VP.

Great chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon please.

I loved when they tried to make Bridget pregnant and I could totally see why it would not work. Particularly because of the girls.
I loved Tony and the team with the Black Sheep references and yes I watched the reruns on Network TV at the time there was no cable.

Hey. Now I don't normally do reviews but this story and series is a really good read so I will break my mold. Loving the multitude of crossovers and all the character interaction. Finally if it's the last story the 28 seconds the long last goodbye maybe. If there is gonna be more then maybe cold hard truth seeing as all the hints your leaving.

Great chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon please

Great chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon please.