Hehehe now I can't stop laughing. I like how u write Laxus.

:-)

Laxus and Mirajane have barely even talked to each other. What makes you think they would be a good couple other than looks? The two seem pretty uninterested in each other.

You're also make me love this couple... Obviously..! More and more.

Haha, good ol' Laxus. XD Great job! :D

Hahaha
That's cute. Nice one :)

Aw Jealous Laxus is so funny. Loved this

Loved it!

awwwwww..! i really love it..! i can't wait for another miraxus's story from u.. good jobs, authorsan.. :)

I like the pairing of laxus and Mira. I think they look good together than laxus x lisanna coz lisanna Is MINE! HAHA

Why are Lucy and Natsu in couple brackets? Because it really doesn't come off as that, now I know they're only the second 'couple' but the way it's written they might as well not be listed at all.

When Laxus threw the magazine to the ground and told Lucy to pick it up, that pissed me off. What a total dick move. He deserved to be bitched out for that.

that was funny!

Awww I soo want more of these couples D:

keep it up!

This was great. Suggestion: Do a bunch of chapters following this kind of plot line for the rest of the ships.