Reviews for Forbidden Love
BannanGodis chapter 6 . 12/21/2018
Update plz!
aka-chan chapter 6 . 1/13/2018
it has been 3 years since the last update. can i still hope for the new chapters? :(
Tam-PokeS chapter 6 . 12/30/2016
It's really one of the most amazing fanfiction I have ever read, and your characters are so perfectly in character !
I think I can see where you want to go with the plot, it makes me kinda sad, because Naruto's parents are such good persons in the anime... But I really like where you're going with this anyway !
I love how everything is against the SasuNaru relationship, and I love SO MUCH how these two interact...
I'm really sad for the Itachi / Sasuke relationship, because their bond is one of my favorite thing in the naruto anime... so i guess i'm kinda sad it's not a "itachi loved sasuke all along" situation. But, well, It's not that much of a deal because once again this story is really amazing !
YaoiFanGirl6221 chapter 6 . 11/6/2016
Great story Can't wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 6 . 10/7/2016
I love this story. Please continue writing it.
VoldyIsAwesome chapter 6 . 7/29/2016
Pls update
aka-chan chapter 6 . 7/13/2016
I don't know why you didn't update it anymore because it's really a shame. This is the best fic I have ever met! Hope you don't abandon this story.
HoneyBear53 chapter 6 . 7/15/2015
You really should continue the story. It really good. And if you choose not to,I understand that _
Evangeline039 chapter 6 . 7/3/2015
Hmm.. I was looking for a good SasuNaru High School story with Uchiha-Sensei and .. this fanfic is amazing! The flow wasn't too slow nor too fast, amusing, and enjoyable at the same time. The chapter was a bit too long though, maybe will causing some reader to get bored and forget to review and finish reading your story. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep writing and Ganbatte! ;)
XxXGaryStuXxX chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
Love it! The best thing about it is your integration of Japanese culture into British culture. (Eggs and bacon aren't a typical Japanese breakfast as far as I'm aware ;p)

By the way, it states that a "vain" looked like it was going to pop up on Ino.. I believe you may have meant "vein" '
Guest chapter 5 . 2/2/2015
AMAZING I love the beginning*nosebleed*
Guest chapter 6 . 1/16/2015
Itachi isn't very nice. I don't mind it though. But if we look at all the things he said and did, he's a fairly cold person: No contact with his brother in two years, and then when he does see him, his attitude is so nonchalant, it's like he's hanging out with a frenemy that he sees regularly, not someone he feels a lot of affection for, and who he hasn't seen in a very long time. Itachi doesn't seem like a bad person, per se, but just not the nicest person in the world.

I really hope you stay consistent with your characterization of him. A lot of times, people will write a mean, distant Itachi, and then two chapters before the end suddenly do a personality 180 with him and make it be so that Itachi is really a warmhearted person who was all about Sasuke all along. It's bad writing and I hate it. (I mean, just because canon did it doesn't mean every story has to uncritically follow what Kishimoto did. At least canon had good reasons for Itachi's retcon.) Anyway, I just had to put that out there because if I see another pointless Itachi personality 180 I'm going to scream.

Besides that, the surprise emergence of Naruto's parents was quite a nice plot twist. Why was Naruto separated from his parents? Why would whoever took Naruto (assuming Minato and Kushina didn't give him up willingly) leave him at the orphanage with his own given name? He'd be a lot easier to find that way, wouldn't he? (And I'd assume that's the last thing whoever took him would want.)

The other question is, what does this mean for Naruto and Sasuke? I could see where, because of their rivalry status, both families would hate the idea of them being involved (and that's on top of objecting to it on the grounds of them both being men, Naruto being a high school student, and Sasuke being his teacher). On the other hand, I could also see Fugaku being thrilled about it. It's not every day where he gets a chance to sink his claws into his competitor's company thanks to his youngest son. He was willing to whore Sasuke out to Sakura, what does it matter to him if Sasuke gets whored out to Naruto instead?

Finally, I like that you are taking things slow with the main pairing. This couple has a lot of obstacles to overcome, and I appreciate it that things like Sasuke's low sex drive haven't been dismissed with a hand wave. Because of the type of person he is, it's only natural Sasuke will take a while to get interested. And because Naruto takes love and marriage seriously (and seems to like Sakura), he isn't going to jump to do anything with a married man. And that's on top of Naruto needing to maintain a decent relationship with Sasuke so he can do well in math, and Sasuke needing to maintain his professionalism so he can have a spot in his father's company.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
It's nice that, despite Sakura's obsession with Sasuke and her forcing him int the marriage, you haven't turned her into some sort of hateful, despicable caricature. She's in the wrong and she will eventually have to realize it, but that doesn't mean that character bashing is the only way for that realization to happen.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/16/2015
Actually, could you not with the side pairings? We've already got one with the KakaIru (two if you count SasuSaku) and that's more than plenty. It's just that side pairings are pretty much unnecessary fanservice and a needless distraction from the main characters. Talking about the love lives of unimportant characters takes focus away from the main story so I'd really rather do without extra pairings. The KakaIru is fine because Iruka is an important character in the fic, so it's cool if you want to flesh out his and Naruto's life together. The SasuSaku is obviously also important. But Naruto's friends aren't important; they are background characters. I don't want to know more about these characters than is absolutely necessary for the plot. In sum, please don't pair the spares.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
I hear you about the manga's ending. I'm so salty over 700 I could open a fucking MINE.

Ahem. Anyway, I do like the beginning of this. It makes for an interesting conflict that not only is Sasuke Naruto's teacher and older than him, but he's also married! Having said that, I don't like cheating fic, but I already get the impression that Sasuke is a very unhappy person, so his marriage must undoubtedly be contributing to that. In which case, it doesn't make the cheating okay, but it means the marriage would have failed whether Naruto came along or not, and I think that's a fair enough reason for cheating to happen without making Naruto or Sasuke look like completely terrible people for it.
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