Reviews for Neka |
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Qorianth Grindelwald chapter 17 . 3/7/2019 Boromir! Stop being a twat! Honor is weighed by the person who is weighing the honor, not the person that has honor! Honor doesn't sound like a word when you say it alot! Honor, honor, honor! Honor is an in the moment thing! |
SortingHat chapter 3 . 10/3/2018 So where is the story? She shouldn't just give in so easy thereis no culture shock or anything. On a scale of realism I rate it a 1 at best for having Tom in it or it would receive a total fail. As in it couldn't get worse then this stay way! |
dauntlessofthesea chapter 17 . 5/3/2016 I love Neka as well! And your story. However perhaps she should start acting a little more like a Jedi Padawan? I mean she's acting immature, vain and prideful. That is not how Jedis act. Just look at Obi-Wan. I'd like to get reactions on her padawan braid. :) |
Sir Baron chapter 17 . 4/30/2016 Hmmm it's a odd story but a very good one :) |
Sir Baron chapter 16 . 3/26/2016 WOW poor Neka, that's bad lol |
Review this that chapter 16 . 3/20/2016 Yay! I really enjoy this crossover! The next chapter sounds good already! |
Schyrsivochter chapter 16 . 3/21/2016 Whoa, a cliffhanger! Nice! So, there’s more Star Wars coming in, daggers and droids. A shame, really. I hope that the assassin droids won’t play that large a part, and if they do, I hope that nothing else Star Wars is coming, because I quite liked it that Neka has nothing left from her world besides her memories and the Force. This doesn’t mean you shouldn’t incorporate anything more from Star Wars; it’s your story, after all. And of course you need a villain that can hold his own against Neka, because otherwise it wouldn’t be fun. I’m nevertheless looking forward to the next chapters. Keep writing! :3 |
Queen Gwedhiel chapter 15 . 12/31/2015 I LOVE this story. Keep on updating! |
ASimpleRaven chapter 15 . 12/9/2015 Hmmmm... Interesting... I liked the character of Neka, i find her interresting and quite original. BUT! You simply dont put her in the story. She is acting simply as a viewer. She is -basically- telling the story from her point of view. Another thing that is missing is... well... Star Wars. You are not putting any Star Wars element (except the Force). I sugest you to put more characters from Star Wars. And, urgently, put a lightsaber. Also, the writing is slightly poorly made, put, generally speaking , it is good. Just try to improve, okay?Another thing that is annoying me is that you are rushing a bit. Slow down, put yourself in the place of Neka. Show us what she is thinking. Minutely. Anyway, im liking, continue the story. It is good?Yes it is, congratulations your earned a shiny medal!Can improve?Yes, it can;This story have THE potential!I am exited to see what will happen! -Beijinhos, good luck on writing! (PS:Sorry for the english) (PPS:See what "beijinhos" means on Google Translate) |
Sir Baron chapter 15 . 12/3/2015 Is Boromir going to live? |
Sir Baron chapter 15 . 12/1/2015 "What? You think I wouldn't join the fun?" Best line ever.:) |
Reviewer chapter 15 . 11/29/2015 Wonderful story. Look forward in reading more! |
Sir Baron chapter 14 . 10/24/2015 Thanks. :) LOL By the way I've read the books and watched the movie.:) |
Schyrsivochter chapter 14 . 10/26/2015 Thank you very much for not abandoning this story! And, of course, for keeping it only Star Wars and Lord of the Rings, and deleting the other chapters! I like this new chapters very much and I’m really looking forward to the next one! |
Sir Baron chapter 13 . 10/13/2015 Please do more:) The wait is killing me.;) Well not for real but you know what I mean.:) LOL |