Hey i just finished reading chapter 1 and 2.
I like where the story is going and want to say, i hope for more in the future and hope you continue.
I read a lot and want to say, your doing a great job and i hope to see another chapter soon. Even if you haven't updated since June 4th 2015.
Well got read so bye.

Personally I'm not a fan of POVs but this is an interesting story idea. People want to hear more about the canon characters, not your OC though. It is very difficult to write a female first gen character without her being a Sue; I know because I've worked hard to make my character not a sue. But a big piece of advice in avoiding making sues is to keep the story centered around and focused on the canon characters. I'm just telling you this because I observed your character's section of this chapter being much longer than Danny's. It's difficult to get most Phans to like OCs because of the DP OCs very bad reputations which is why it's best to introduce them very gradually, and not all at once.

This story is really good. As for doing a victory dance look up Victory Dance by DeStorm on youtube it can be the song to go with it.

Can't wait for what happens next! Great story! :D

This has a very good start. You have me deeply intrigued. Continue this when you have the chance.

Please continue this story it's sounds like a good story and I want to know what happens next so please please please update xxx

I wonder what happened to Danny that made him lose his memory.

This is a bit of a different way of Danny ending up in another place. Hope you continue this story as I want to read more.

No, I don't think that this was a cliffy, I love the beginning!

Hey Frost nice crossover cant wait for next chapter and your other story's later

Sweet start. Stay Frosty- yeah, bad pun :P