Reviews for Fixing It |
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Sampdoria chapter 1 . 5/7/2015 Brilliant:-)) |
AnaBrest15 chapter 1 . 3/11/2015 Write another story about them please! :) |
xDarklightx chapter 1 . 2/28/2015 I like it |
Moi chapter 1 . 2/25/2015 While this plot-wise is a nice little fic, there's one thing you could improve with your writing style: Make sure to stick to past tense, instead of at times switching back and forth between past and present tense, e.g. like in "Yes, his case load is heavy", etc. I know, it is always heavy, however, it is better style to write "Yes, his case load was heavy". My teachers back when kept correcting exactly that in my essays for years. I never got their point until after I graduated. Years after. No wonder I never managed a grade above average back in school for my written stuff. ;) Cheers and heads up! Moi |